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The Skies Tears

In the woods on a bench You will find me completely drenched Cant sleep because of the rain The sky cried enough tears for my pain This is not my bed A million thoughts running through my head It's gonna be a long night With the morning's sun out of sight Soaked by the skies tears I layed to rest all my fears When I wish I was dead I remember what I said As I lay in the field Lord be with me be my shield

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Date: 11/17/2015 10:27:00 PM
Eric :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:20:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem - I wish you luck with many more poems - A pleasure to meet you here, Eric :) - Best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:36:00 PM
:)
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:02:00 AM
Hi Eric, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/2/2015 9:25:00 PM
Eric, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Eric Oakley
Date: 11/2/2015 9:36:00 PM
Thank you

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