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The Skater

The skater falls The girl bawls The agony of mistake So much to forsake Dreams realized Fans and commentators idealize A flawless routine An injury not foreseen The blade glides The coach guides The thrill of winning Their head spinning The loser's misfortune Points earned, only a portion Their head bowed in emotional upset Replaying the error, lots of regret The winner soars The loser closed doors

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Date: 11/12/2022 2:31:00 PM
I have personally experienced your poem in real life as in my younger days I was an avid figure skater. I know the elation of winning and the agony of losing! / Maurice
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Date: 2/19/2022 10:17:00 AM
Some losers accept their defeat whereas others learn from their mistakes . . . . Enjoyed!
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Lynn D.
Date: 2/20/2022 6:18:00 AM
True. Thanks for your comment.