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The Situation

The lovely fog roared through the rain forest. Smearing blind velvet eyes in the tropical season. Bliss crust showering the ungraceful carpet of decaying leaves. Animals scattered W I L D like cions in a purse. Evil prowling through the terrified animals. Domination felt through the large kings of the jungle. Middle class mammals meander about their senses heightened for murderous creatures that stalk on the dark forest floor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 11:38:00 AM
I loved it! Nice work getting featured
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week John. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, John
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Date: 3/28/2011 4:36:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup John. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2011 5:57:00 AM
Fog can be terrifying, John! Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 3/25/2011 6:25:00 PM
I enjoyed this creative write on The Situation, John
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Date: 3/25/2011 5:23:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry with it's creative theme ..hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv...
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