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The Sidhe

Oh, God and Goddess are all around us. from place to place unguided, they’ve found us. Land of limpid eyes and skies, where mystery abounds. ‘Mongst lisping lips, oft heard Gaelic limericks sound. While gale gusted winds whip wave dashed waters to mist; atop the high cliffs of Moher the Fairie found us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/2/2009 1:37:00 PM
P.S-I just changed it s bit to make it more clear (the vying line) is that better? Easier to understand? thank you!
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Date: 1/2/2009 1:33:00 PM
Hi! Just a response to your suggestions, I only used the word, That, 3 times in the entire long poem and do not feel that is too much, respectivly. :) also, as for the vying line, the repitition of darkness and fear was what I was refering too. Hope that clears things up, thank you for your comments! Have a blessed '09! Kristin
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Date: 1/2/2009 9:02:00 AM
Thank you for sharing
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