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The Sibyl - Astarte's Birth

Aphrodite-wed on summer's noon I lay me long reflecting And glad my eye the sky as hillcrest partner shares this view - Fond Cytherea seems at nature with a point in thought-fixed time All else save lady with her doting nymphs is show'ring green about And I intruder at her foaming birth rebuke the modern scandal Nothing lurid naught impure my naked lady stands at bath While soon doves blithely perched (wet wings do mark a chilling breeze) Most amorous white birds praise my passion's woozy lightness 'neath the trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/24/2011 2:13:00 PM
This isn't a newbie, you've always had a creatively sublime imagination, Daver!! As though a summer solstice infant. Love the setting and imagery! Best wishes to you and yours, Love, Mikki
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Date: 6/4/2010 9:21:00 AM
VEry pretty one here!! Hey, all the ones here labeled Sibyl that I see posted. ARe they all from your Sibyl book? Thanks for your comment to my cheesecake poem, although I would not say half a day's calories are in just one tiny piece, but rather in one LARGE piece . hahaha (and depends on how many calories you are able to get away in one average day too!)
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Date: 1/29/2009 5:49:00 PM
Oooh - really wonderful. You are an excellent writer Daver - I'm so glad I discovered you too!
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Date: 12/14/2008 11:38:00 AM
This one is truly amazing. You are so gifted, and this artful poem was well deserved to be among the featured works so more will read it! Congratulations, Daver. ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/9/2008 12:26:00 PM
Warmest congrats Daver on your awesome poetry being featured this week. Happy wishes for a wonderful holiday season. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/8/2008 10:17:00 AM
I can invision it so clearly. Thank you for sharing Dave. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/8/2008 12:30:00 AM
Congrats on your feature write this week Daver.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/7/2008 5:17:00 PM
Dear Daver - Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Wishing you and yours a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 12/7/2008 3:22:00 PM
A wonderful, mystical poem, Daver! I missed it the first time, so I'm glad to catch it in the featured section this time around! Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/7/2008 2:23:00 PM
This is a creative piece. Intereting format to carry your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/10/2008 3:07:00 PM
I like the form and the fomat of this write, it speaks of passion and wonderment, nice write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 9/6/2008 5:43:00 PM
Your Greek Mythology writes are delightful. As though you are writing from another place and time. This is a beautiful poem. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/6/2008 9:10:00 AM
Exquisite. So well written and simply love how you ended it. Very well done. Regards Heidie
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