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The Shell

I am the shield that has protected this soul, the armor of flesh that has yet kept it whole I am the vessel that has carried it so far, the legs and the feet that have trod where we are I am the walls within which it's dwelt, the roof and the floors on which it has knelt I am all these things and yet I am naught I am corporeal, not immortal and will soon be forgot I am but a husk, just a layer of skin, the flesh and the blood and the guts here within I am but a mask, no more than a veil, for what's carried inside to the end of the trail I am but a casing, a covering at best, destined to rot and decay with the rest I am not all of this man; I am merely his shell I carry no weight; I but wait for a bell

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Date: 2/2/2015 7:04:00 AM
Awesomely fluid flow of thoughts on what has been the subject of such obsessive commercialism. The body, beautiful or not, perfect or not, since the olden days has been the focus of so much attention and pampering to the point of absurdity. This reminds us of its mortality, and a call to focus on what's inside, the one that will survive...A 7 and a fav! Warm smiles from the land of thousand isles, sire...Kim :D
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David Brown
Date: 2/2/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind comments Kim, much appreciated

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