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The Shape of Water

The shape of water such a mystery to me Staring at it for hours And still the shape is free A trickle drop drop A gurgle and bubble A breath infused whisper A deafening titans struggle It’s the shape of power Of love, joy and pain Magnificent roaring waves Couples dancing in the rain A solitary tear of pride A mother’s love bursting her heart Open sluices from eyes Sorrows tears tearing worlds apart The shape of water is freedom Flowing, tugging, swirling, ebbing, evaporating To places I’ll never see But feeling gentle kisses of mist raise goosebumps on my skin The shape of water is still a beautiful mystery to me 22.06.2021

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Date: 6/22/2021 8:35:00 AM
Absolutely amazing take on the contest theme. Great images. Many wonderful lines. A solitary tear of pride loved this line. Many more wonderful lines... All the best for contest.
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Melody Wiggett
Date: 6/23/2021 1:52:00 AM
Thank you soo much Rama:) water is such a mesmerising topic, and I am quite taken with it:) I’m really glad you enjoyed the read:)
Date: 6/22/2021 7:30:00 AM
I simply love this write. You've breathed joy all through it. Beautifully done. A expression of hope, faith and love. God bless you with many many more. Love, Gina
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Melody Wiggett
Date: 6/23/2021 1:37:00 AM
Aww thank you soo much Gina:) I’m really soo happy you enjoyed it and soo humbled by your encouragement :) hugs:)

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