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The Shape of Dark - A Murder of Crows

murders rise on nights like these crows - in bushels cross and stitch the horizon dead painting dusk blind the shape of dark on nights like these… memories can snag on sob and storm from deepest fathom torn oaths, in cold belly set the heavy shore to lag on the horizon where on ice and rock they lynch the wing and in shadows wrought bury the light in darkness, vague as death painting dusk blind the shape of dark on nights like these… mountains shiver into cold sleep to possess the deep where ivies bloom and creep on lattice drift, above the hum where once clicking the cicadas sung breaking slumber under blue moon spell frolicking frond, breathless fell so reckless, ambles the wayward heart painting dusk blind…I find the shape of dark on nights like these… on whom no sun deep fire shall look to shed precipitously but softly sings the somber sea her wayward notes afloat greet the ear (a memory?) a haunting stroke the rustling of voices (laughter?) locked in throat painting dusk blind on nights like these… I am at peace a murder of crows in backyard flicker while in beautiful darkness swoons the distant moon beating the light my heart held warm that no murder on this night shall swarm save for sounds soft and low sent through the wind from a distant crow -

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Date: 1/24/2024 6:31:00 AM
Interesting. Well done.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/24/2024 7:47:00 AM
thank you for the visit
Date: 1/2/2024 9:49:00 AM
Hi Mat, a huge FAVE. Edgar Allan Poe would be proud. You have a genius way with words. Happy New Year warmest wishes. Belated Congratulations on POTD. ~
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/4/2024 7:44:00 PM
thank you regina
Date: 1/1/2024 5:56:00 PM
Congrats on your poem of the day! So happy to see this... :)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/4/2024 7:43:00 PM
thank you
Date: 1/1/2024 6:05:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy this honor and have a splendid 2024
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/1/2024 4:41:00 PM
a splendid and creative 24 to you as well
Date: 1/1/2024 5:54:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this dark haunting poem.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 1/1/2024 4:41:00 PM
thank you karen - all the best in the coming year
Date: 12/31/2023 9:33:00 PM
Congrats on POTD, Mat, for this haunting poem, which sinks its talons into crevices of my heart. Excelsior, Gershon
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 9:39:00 PM
gratitude for your time
Date: 12/31/2023 8:25:00 PM
' on nights like these, ' methinks hiding is the best option. So cool if you're at peace, though. :) Just sayin'. You've created a masterpiece, one that Poe would enjoy. Some deep, dark and eerie thoughts tangle within. Congratulations Mat, on Poem of the Day. My best to you, in the New Year. Brandy
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 9:16:00 PM
thank you brandy - my best to you as well in this new year
Date: 12/31/2023 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. A hauntingly beautiful read. I especially liked last verse. Smiles, Anne :-)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 9:15:00 PM
thank you for the reply -
Date: 12/31/2023 12:24:00 PM
Brilliant exposition befitting Price's voice, an accomplisher of voiceovers, like MJ's Thriller, but I agree, --the originator is best of the best noting the subtleties that every word possesses. Cheers, to your POTD write & 2024, my friend, plus the Fave, of course. Aloha, William
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 9:19:00 PM
Ol' Vincent would have done me proud for sure - I can still feel that laughter
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:02:00 PM
Many thanks
Date: 12/31/2023 11:19:00 AM
A very skilled poem Mat - so very well written. Lots of great imagery and it is a very intriguing piece. So much to admire. Many congratulations on POTD- the last of 2023! Well done! A very happy New Year to you! :):)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:03:00 PM
My gratitude
Date: 12/31/2023 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Mat! Excellent imagery and use of Metaphor, my friend. Enjoy your special day if recognition. Bill
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:04:00 PM
Thank you bill
Date: 12/31/2023 9:31:00 AM
Mat, this is a hauntingly beautiful poem of words, an evocative picture painting nights with crows as the artists of dusk. Through poetic mastery, it weaves a mesmerizing tale, entangling memories, nature's whispers, and the heart's peace within the enigmatic embrace of the night. Each stanza, a brushstroke, vividly etches the allure of darkness, balancing eerie mystery with a tranquil refuge. Your artistry captures the night, inviting readers to immerse in its depths while finding answers.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:05:00 PM
Appreciate this response
Date: 12/31/2023 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading this one. Happy New Year... Write more in 24................
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:06:00 PM
To you as well
Date: 12/31/2023 8:10:00 AM
I so love this Mat. Well-deserved POTD. Congratulations! :)
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:06:00 PM
Deepest gratitude
Date: 12/31/2023 6:59:00 AM
An excellent, superbly written poem with intriguing metaphors - a piece for reading many times! Congratulations on being chosen as POTD!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:07:00 PM
Deepest thanks
Date: 12/31/2023 6:31:00 AM
A very intriguing write Mat..."on nights like these"..."the shape of dark"..."painting dusk blind". Well done and an exceptional choice for POTD
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:07:00 PM
Much appreciated
Date: 12/31/2023 6:28:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Mat. Awesome poetry deserving of all the accolades.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/31/2023 6:11:00 AM
Wow this is so rich in metaphors and bathed in the natural world. I loved it and what a wonderful and well deserved poem for the POTD. Happy New Year. I don't know you but will fav it. Thank you.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:08:00 PM
I appreciate this
Date: 12/31/2023 5:56:00 AM
Fantastic poetry Mat. This would have likely done well in the Plath/Poe contest. Nice to see it made POTD anyway. Enjoy your day
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:16:00 PM
Thank you tom
Date: 12/31/2023 5:26:00 AM
a superbly written but haunting story with spooky imagery. I loved the alliteration. I liked the ending with its positive outlook. All that being said, your poem is worthy of being POTD. Congrats!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:16:00 PM
All the best sara
Date: 12/31/2023 4:10:00 AM
Mat, wonderfully eerie imagery, congratulations on POTD!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:17:00 PM
Appreciate this
Date: 12/31/2023 2:37:00 AM
Excellent choice for POTD.. congrats
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:17:00 PM
My gratitude
Date: 12/31/2023 1:56:00 AM
Congrats on your potd honor!
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:17:00 PM
Thank you karen
Date: 12/31/2023 1:45:00 AM
Congratulations Mat on POTD!! A very haunting and incredibly beautiful poem! Debx
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:18:00 PM
I appreciate the response
Date: 12/31/2023 1:26:00 AM
Silent One said ‘dark and deep’ so let me say ‘deep and dark’, to sound original! “they lynch the wing and in shadows wrought bury the light in darkness, vague as death painting dusk blind the shape of dark” ~ Warmest congratulations on POTD, Mat.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/31/2023 2:18:00 PM
Deepest gratitude
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