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The Shape of Clouds

I’m sitting here, a place that could be anywhere, and moments linger, then slip by, since time requires a past to form the gift of now. The future’s a reforming realm towards which our nows must daily race, for the sum of moments must not supplant our destinies, else all is surely lost. And swirling in the currents of air, and swirling in the currents of time— perhaps awake, perhaps asleep— I found myself lost within and felt the prickly damp of clouds. Where glimpsed were all my hopes and dreams that lay in hovering expectation, awaiting only effort of my mind and hands to mold them into useful form. Coming to my senses I recalled what I had seen and knew for certain then that dreams are real and hopes are not in vain. Often now I walk outside where I’m content to fill my pensive hours, gazing skyward toward aspirations yet unrealized, and daily they’re arrayed for me, outlined in the shape of clouds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/3/2018 11:56:00 PM
Nice -JT
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Mark Peterson
Date: 7/17/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thanks, JT, I’m glad you enjoyed my work.
Date: 6/26/2018 6:20:00 PM
wow, so poetic and reflective, Mark. Not the kind of poem I would produce about myself but I love seeing how people look at things!
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Date: 6/26/2018 8:41:00 PM
Well, it's just a poem with bits here and there reflective of how I feel. Please read my poem, "Basis of Belief" and find out what I think of the notions of thought. Paraphrasing Clarke, it's not only stranger than we imagine; its stranger than we can imagine. Many thanks for your comments, which I treasure.
Date: 6/26/2018 8:06:00 AM
Your poem has left me pondering how the Mandela effect has changed all our lives. It has become very difficult to dismiss. "time requires a past to form the gift of now." I so agree. I enjoyed this piece and your deep thoughts so much Mark. : )
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Date: 6/26/2018 8:44:00 PM
You reflect far more deeply and effectively than most, and when I see your avatar, I know I have a treat in store.
Date: 6/23/2018 6:55:00 AM
I loved reading your "Ghe Shape Of Clouds" this morning!
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Date: 6/23/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, Lyric Man, for your lovely reply. Very heartening to me.

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