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The Shanghai Sonnet

Congealed upon the banks of this tamed dragon sprawl stacks of crude buildings. Concrete covers all but two glassy kings, thick smoggy gusts give them a grimy kiss. Insipid pillars choke sunlight, endless roads incise the very earth, wings of apartments cram into ev’rything, ev’rywhere stacks upon stacks of units. Herein lies the future, our dystopia has arrived through the hazy looking glass. Perhaps a reminder, utopia is not coming, or maybe the hourglass has but some time left. Then the route is clear. We must turn everything around. And fast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2016 11:11:00 AM
ASHLEY, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/3/2014 6:10:00 PM
A fine metrical verse... Enjoyed.. Linda
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:35:00 AM
Thank you for always sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Ashley. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:49:00 PM
welcome to poetry soup!! enjoyed reading our work!!
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:36:00 PM
very good verse and one true observation the form is sonnet but it is not iambic pentameter. Light & Love
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