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The Shadows Following Apparitions

like shadows they follow us they tell their stories on pages that may or may not be seen, or read, we a'muse them - "we", of course, are truly inconsequential in the greater scheme of things; they are like ghosts echoing their called hauntings, we catch the vibrations of them, every now and then, the faint echoes of stilted messages they are magnificently sending, we wake in the middle of our nights, and shudder, grasping the veracity - of It all, when the dark hours whisper, and like shadows we write back to them, the other beings inside "us" like in "them", we read back what they write, thinking we are quite smart to note what they impart, but then - we consider ourselves so much smaller, and obsequiously apart - albeit, a part of it all, like implanted in the written briefs of higher things, so much better off than us; we consider the contours of our standing on the edge of such poetry, there are boundaries, after all ... this much is true - we are the shadows following apparitions, we hear their words occasionally, ecstatically and remorsefully undertowed, we are not so shining as they, for they push through like comets so much more easily - we are to them Pediculus Humanus Capitis, irritants, embracing resistance problems, easily passed and swiftly exterminated by comment and review; by us, they are read on the run, for they let us know, we are slow, and we should pursue their gorgeous egos ... which are ... so much faster, their intellectual disasters mined like minds for gold, valued most highly, posthumously, in the Evermore hereafter, you may view, but do not touch, they seem to vericate, for "we" are the precise opposite of "us", and there is never any "You" in this golden real estate although the common denominator they would proffer, their priceless empathy - is in reality a low equation; without hesitation, they let us know without too many words - if at all, that we have arrived at this party, way far too late - the common "we", so inconsequential, smaller, plural formed, to be buried, without service after the inevitable dousing in their redrum, we roll over we turn to rust amidst their Irish four leaf clovers Candide Diderot. ‘24 "I thought how unpleasant it is to be locked out; and I thought how it is worse, perhaps, to be locked in." Virginia Woolf

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Date: 4/13/2024 9:05:00 AM
Dear Candide, What a hauntingly beautiful reflection on the shadows of existence and our fleeting encounters with them. I loved how the imagery shows our insignificance in the grand scheme of things, yet our relentless pursuit to understand and connect with the ethereal. Your words are a reflection to us showing our humble place amidst the echoes of greater beings. By the way I am a big Phillip Glass fan. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/13/2024 10:04:00 AM
One questions the outcome of all this poetry. Shall it mean much, if at all, when the time for all arrives? That time, that we all know, we will inevitably face. Biblical or not. I wonder what Woolf, Poe and all others, laureates or not, felt and are feeling...in this, their journey. Philip Glass is a genious, but he would dispute that...
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Date: 4/13/2024 10:03:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l5rQwfcU70E
Date: 4/13/2024 7:17:00 AM
The Poet Acts/Philip Glass.
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Date: 4/13/2024 7:17:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fca2oXLe9g4
Date: 4/13/2024 7:16:00 AM
"Leave my loneliness unbroken—quit the bust above my door, Take thy beak from out my heart, and take thy form from off my door” Quoth the Raven “Nevermore.”
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Date: 4/13/2024 7:16:00 AM
And the Raven, never flitting, still is sitting, still is sitting On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door; And his eyes have all the seeming of a demon’s that is dreaming, And the lamp-light o’er him streaming throws his shadow on the floor; And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor Shall be lifted—nevermore." Edgar Allan Poe.

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