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The Shadow of You

Alone, I stood before you, A shoulder to lend; a panacea, On reaching out to your heart In hope I might touch you I asked why of deafened ears, And of your tears unwilling to fall Am I spirit you breeze by, A voice subdued, unheard? Embers lay scattered, broken-hearted In the ashes of a once burning love: Oh-foolish to try and kindle, Your passion of love’s spent dream

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/31/2015 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Lyric Man! Your comment is appreciated indeed! And so too the Welcome to Poetry Soup! My best to you. Dom
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:28:00 PM
Dom, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Dom Lane
Date: 7/31/2015 3:45:00 PM
Thank you much, Linda! :) I look forward to reading and sharing poetry! My best to you. Dom
Date: 7/27/2015 12:01:00 PM
Dom, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Dom Lane
Date: 7/31/2015 3:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Skat! :) I look forward to meeting you all! And thank you for the fine Welcome to Poetry Soup! My very best to you, Skat. Dom

Book: Shattered Sighs