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The Seldom Way We Walk

The Seldom way we walk We walk upon a fine line of care Of put myself out there and clinging to my share , of like me like you, and love all living things because they have feelings too True? That women hold us gently from the depths of their souls and men reach out and touch our souls softly That everything we feel is what we feel for those They know its what I've chose That it all comes from within That when we tell , men and women that they are great and and they are good With conviction we say that are words are to be believed Because all we want to do is to give and to recieve Once someone has totally invested in us With faith in ourselves and in Jesus a strong belief we release back into the world the love and care they have shown us We pray along with hope that those who have loved us shall be loved and cared about in return and whats left is a little bit of fear that we use to patrol us not hurt ourseles or any other living being

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Date: 8/29/2009 4:22:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:35:00 AM
typos but good idea and writing, welcome to the soup, would like to see more form you.
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Date: 8/29/2009 6:53:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Amy. I wish you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 5:45:00 AM
Amy, Welcome to Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your poem. It has a wonderful expressive feel to it. Keep writing. Sincerely, DAS-J
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