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The See Saw

The see saw goes up Two small children having fun The see saw goes down One child gets off Then the other follows The see saw goes up The see saw goes down Then the see saw balance evenly Only to go up once more Then down again to get off

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 9/9/2017 7:52:00 PM

Don't get off when the other person is high up on it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/10/2017 11:48:00 AM

So true, I always wait for my end to be down before I get off. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/9/2017 3:54:00 PM

I love seesaws, Darlene, and even at my age I still grab the chance to go on one; same applies to swings :) ~ I hope you've had a lovely start to the new year! Best regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/10/2017 11:43:00 AM

...and so far the new year and I have been getting on fine :)

Paul Callus
Date: 1/10/2017 11:41:00 AM

Glad to see that you're also a 'swinger' Darlene...nothing to do with an uninhibited lifestyle, mind you:)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/9/2017 6:47:00 PM

Hello Paul,I love the swing, I get on push myself up and I feel Like I am flying up to the sky. When I come down I feel lost.I enjoy the swing. I also enjoy your poetry.Yes I had a lovely start to the New year. Did you?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 6:37:00 PM

Nice one about the see saw. Those were the days, being a child playing on the see saw! I think I called it teeter totter!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/11/2017 5:45:00 PM

I use to go on the see saw as well. I also went on the swing. It was my favourite. I enjoyed pushing myself high into the air.I enjoyed the playground.