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The Secret That Perfume Companies Don'T Know

My hands are sore and cracked So its the yellow gloves now At home with hands in water_ Doing daily mundane chores Fix meals, feed the animals Pet the dog, brush the cats Wash the clothes_enough of that In kitchen hands in water Those yellow gloves just don't fit The odor that emits from them Terrible_then it stays__stays A pity perfume leaves fast What I need to do is sell Perfume companies the secret

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Date: 12/20/2010 8:43:00 AM
Wishing u a wonderful week before Christmas Sara and praying all needs will be met in the New Year my friend with luv..
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:13:00 PM
I haven't noticed the smell you describe, but I do enjoy the humor here, Sara. Maybe you can inspire a new line of nonporous gloves! LOL Love and blessings for the tough week ahead, dear. Been thinking of you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/18/2010 1:18:00 PM
simple yet effective Sarah, if you can find humor in the everyday things you are allright by me. merry christmas, GOD bless.
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Date: 12/17/2010 1:13:00 PM
Wanted to ask a favor.My 11 year old wrote her first poem called Christmas Bliss.She is waiting to see if she gets comments and how many.Please take a peak and leave a little comment.Hope all is well.
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Date: 12/17/2010 7:51:00 AM
SOUP MAIL...Sara..
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Date: 12/17/2010 6:05:00 AM
Thank you for sharing me with the secret.Exceptional write,Sara
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Date: 12/16/2010 9:02:00 PM
hahaha, good one, Sara. I am glad that doesn't happen to my hands. I don't do a lot of chores , ya know, haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/16/2010 8:28:00 PM
This is so creative..I think your one to something ...lol. BG
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Date: 12/16/2010 7:14:00 PM
Oh, this is good. I love how you take life, just everyday life, and turn it into a poem. Very good.
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:44:00 PM
Excellent write Sara... that secret is safe my friend..haha... SOUP MAIL..luv..
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