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Where is the secret of the rainbow? At the edge of one's own life? Whence does it come, with those lovely pastel colours? Is it a heavenly art or a mere human illusion? Some form of an ancient creative masterpiece? Perhaps expressionism was reassessed? The spiritual in natural art is oft-forgotten in musty mists, where the soul engages in confrontations with the deadly reaper. The appalling midst of winter intensifies in the freeze, and the psychology of death deepens, for we are too much attached to worldly cares. Characteristic emotions in cowardly conflicts. One can say so very few words about the astute business of a measured life, like autumn's falling bronzed leaves, its face value is not easily perceived. For dead leaves turn into compost, no peaceful transition true, but a must that leads and helps life's renewal in spring. Forget the troubled dream of dreary life, let the seasons daub their watercolours bold and free, the rainbow assigns a variety of mellow hues, chooses always the brightest. For the secret of the rainbow a symbol of new hope lies in its Creator. Placed First

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Date: 4/22/2024 6:45:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, Constance
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Date: 4/16/2024 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 4/15/2024 10:12:00 PM
Nature is born and back to the soil it lives. The rainbow a sign of peace, God's promise. Lovely imagery, feeling, and write. Hugs
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Date: 4/15/2024 2:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win! What an engaging beautiful poem!
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Date: 4/15/2024 6:02:00 AM
The secret of the rainbow only God knows, so beautiful is a rainbow whenever it glows. A wonderful poem Victor, congratulations on receiving a first placement in the contest… Beryl
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Date: 4/14/2024 4:11:00 PM
Love this intellectual approach Victor, but mostly love that last line
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Date: 4/14/2024 12:22:00 PM
This is simply a beautiful read adore your work the visual art is awesome as well many blessings.
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Date: 4/14/2024 9:23:00 AM
New Hope is what I gathered from your conclusion, that is fantastic. This is so profound, Victor.
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Date: 4/13/2024 10:59:00 PM
Thoughts, lovingly composed. You've written a new perspective to the rainbow.
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:13:00 PM
Your fascinating poem delves into beautiful mystery, offering valuable insights, Victor. I love the final verse. :)
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:18:00 PM
such inspirational words, Victor. I thought your imagery was outstanding (autumn's falling bronzed leaves) I love your use of a rainbow as a symbol of hope. You've written a truly outstanding poem. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 4/13/2024 4:31:00 PM
Yes, definitely the secret/s lie in its Creator Who told us it was put there as a reminder that the earth would never be flooded again to destroy it in totality, but it would be destroyed by fire in the end. Thanks for the wonderful creation that you have penned. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara K
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Date: 4/13/2024 4:13:00 PM
You opened with a good question, and closed with a great answer. I must say that nobody wants a confrontation with the deadly reaper.
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Date: 4/13/2024 3:44:00 PM
Hello Victor, your poem really goes deep into the mysteries of life, death, and renewal, together with imagery and contemplation with profound insight. I loved the symbolism of the rainbow as a symbol of hope and renewal is beautifully portrayed. Your words invite reflection on the cycles of nature and the transcendent beauty found within. Very thought-provoking piece. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/13/2024 3:21:00 PM
Hello Victor, Rainbows are beautiful. I like them. when i see a rainbow i stare at it for hours. enjoying the colors i see. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene/
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Date: 4/13/2024 2:49:00 PM
The beauty of nature is truly delightful. Victor, your poetry is incredibly powerful. Embrace the vibrant and ever-changing seasons as they beautifully depict the essence of life. Release yourself from the confines of a monotonous existence and dare to dream.
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Date: 4/13/2024 1:08:00 PM
Always choose the brightest colors to paint your rainbow, your poetry is beautiful, like a painting. Also, a rainbow !
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Date: 4/13/2024 10:50:00 AM
With many beautiful colors to see the rainbow holds a spiritual meaning, Very nicely penned
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Date: 4/13/2024 10:30:00 AM
Enjoyed this deep, soulful, spiritual read, Victor
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Date: 4/13/2024 9:54:00 AM
The art and the beauty of the renewal of life as we know it is so thoughtfully expressed by your words Victor! Captured by its vibrant imagery, it is pleasure to read! Happy Saturday!
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Date: 4/13/2024 8:44:00 AM
So much joy amidst bounty of nature. An inspiring poem, Victor.--Forget the troubled dream of dreary life, let the seasons daub their water colors bold and free--Much enjoyed.
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Date: 4/13/2024 6:20:00 AM
Your poem poem is a thought-provoking exploration of the intersection between the natural world and the human spirit, reminding us to find meaning and inspiration in the wonders of creation and the enduring promise of hope.
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Date: 4/13/2024 5:42:00 AM
A symbol of new hope… that last line sums up this soulfully divine and beautiful poem woven in such eloquence, the opening lines were stunning and so creative and i love how youv written so many lines in this! I think this will do very well in the contest. Best wishes, pleasure reading always your work
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Date: 4/13/2024 4:12:00 AM
Great word pairings and bright images in this thought provoking poem, Victor:)
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Date: 4/13/2024 3:11:00 AM
"The spiritual in natural art is oft-forgotten in musty mists, where the soul engages in confrontations with the deadly reaper." Wow! Very profound. "the rainbow assigns a variety of mellow hues, chooses always the brightest. For the secret of the rainbow a symbol of new hope lies in its Creator." Well done, Victor. Good luck in contest.
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