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The Second Chance

A slice of morning Last evening offered me nice Bunch of silken buds As I could not get my vase The poem couldn’t be written This morning I was Prepared with a crimson pot For a second chance She came with a white lily No more mistakes so silly _________________________ 01/092016

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Date: 9/5/2016 12:32:00 PM
We all are so glad for the second chance we get to write it down. Nice little write.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/7/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/2/2016 6:51:00 AM
I love the meaning meant in your poem and delivered in such clever metaphors - so creative this one! CayCay
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/2/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thank you for getting into the images ...
Date: 9/1/2016 10:02:00 AM
Good write, Kai
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/2/2016 12:41:00 AM
Thank you ...

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