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The Seas

seas transport safely or serve as cemeteries all seasons posted February 10, 2016 March 5, 2018, entered in Mick Talbot's Haiku: Theme, Water Contest

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Joseph May

Date: 3/10/2018 7:16:00 AM

Congrats on your win Janice..

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/10/2018 7:36:00 AM

Thanks so much, Joseph! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/8/2018 8:10:00 PM

Truth spoken! Congrats!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2018 9:40:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2018 7:29:00 PM

Oh that middle line was so clever. Yes, just think of all who perished and whose graves are at the ocean's floor!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2018 7:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Haiku writing isn't easy for me! Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2018 12:52:00 PM

i found this very touching as our friend's husband was a navy man and his ashes were scattered at sea. many congrats on your win Janice:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2018 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan! I'm always glad to know a poem of mine resonates with someone. Janice

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/8/2018 10:55:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Janice. Powerful haiku.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2018 11:24:00 AM

Thanks so much, Line! Janice

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/8/2018 8:36:00 AM

Paints a picture that's for sure. Congratulations on your placement... Mick

Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/8/2018 9:03:00 AM

THANKS, Mick; and thanks for placing my poem! Janice

Elaine George

Date: 2/12/2016 7:11:00 AM

EXCELLENT HAIKU, JANICE. SURE TO TOP THE WINNERS LIST. ELAINE

Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2016 8:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Elaine! Janice

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2016 12:25:00 PM

a striking 'ku with a greeat end line, janice... huggs

Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2016 12:29:00 PM

Thanks, Nette! Janice