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When life is spinning out side your mind, and you find yourself soul searching for the truth inside. Look on ahead to the left, right and a little bit behind Then get ready to embrace the change, or just let it ride. For the day may come when you let your guards down And the pain in your heart is all that's left to be found Your soul will feel like only but a whisper in the wind With this one chance for you, to start over again You will then be ready to listen with your heart from deep within Wanting with a feeling to be free, you will then be able to begin Take a breath of fresh mental air and exhale your troubles away Open your mind and listen with care, to what your heart has to say Love and peace are the beauty, coming from within thee Share them with the world and all that you see Give yourself a chance to embrace and never to deny All the world has to offer you,then let your spirit fly
*A beautiful collab with Germaine Pasley* :o) Dan Kearley:3-2-12

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Date: 12/6/2012 4:03:00 AM
Wow! this is a fabulous poem....this totally stands out like a neon sign to me. Well done to you and Germaine on a truely wonderful poem.....this is going on my favs list - Shaz
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Date: 9/27/2012 4:01:00 AM
Wow! I love this poem. It just makes me want to soar. To work on my inner and outer self - to be a better person. It was just what I needed. Thank you!
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Date: 3/31/2012 1:09:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging comments and your words of thoughtfulness that you put into your poems! Blessings to you! JP
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Date: 3/29/2012 8:39:00 PM
a beautiful message Dan, great collab!
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Date: 3/24/2012 2:32:00 PM
Beautiful and sensitive!
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Date: 3/19/2012 6:00:00 PM
This one really speaks to me. This is a wonderful collaboration!! :D Keep up the great work. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/13/2012 5:54:00 PM
You collab with anyone so well and I thought I was the only one! :) Soup mail finally.
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Date: 3/10/2012 9:40:00 PM
I hope lifes not spun you right off soup Dan..long time no see xx hugs
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:04:00 PM
Wonderful inspiring poem! Well done Dan and Germaine ; )
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Date: 3/5/2012 11:03:00 PM
takes my breath away.. you both brought the house down with this spectacle of a write... very uplifting!..:) huggs
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Date: 3/5/2012 1:36:00 PM
soup mail you!!!!!
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:57:00 AM
Had to take another read, greetings my man friend from the land of butterflies :)
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Cindy Lu
Date: 3/5/2012 7:57:00 AM
new post.... didn't mean you gave em to me...ah shucks...
Date: 3/3/2012 7:04:00 AM
great work you guys!! Enjoyed reading today!! flight is a dream!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 3/3/2012 11:28:00 AM
Thank you,Doris :o)
Date: 3/2/2012 6:21:00 PM
Dan,,this is very beautiful~have a nice one ;-)* PD
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Dan Kearley
Date: 3/2/2012 9:15:00 PM
Thanks PD :o) Sorry I haven't been around lately.Thanks so much for the comment. :o)
Date: 3/2/2012 5:11:00 PM
It sure is a beautiful one Dan, I especially love the line "take a breathe of fresh mental air and exhale your troubles away. Excellent advice I could use these days!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 3/2/2012 9:13:00 PM
Thanks Lizzie :o) I'm still waiting for you to "get in the mood" Ha,ha :o) I don't get to see you on here much anymore... :o( I miss you. :o)
Date: 3/2/2012 2:15:00 PM
Oy we do make some beautiful poetry ! It came out wonderfully don't you think?
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Dan Kearley
Date: 3/2/2012 2:59:00 PM
I do,I do,we really do! :o) Thanks for taking the time,and dealing with my annoying little quirks. :o)
Date: 3/2/2012 12:55:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Dan. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:02:00 AM
Hello you....yes, YOU! Never lose hope, dreams and love.This is a wery good poem Dan (and Germaine).I like the last verse best....Love... peace...share...take and give and let your spirit fly. - F.E.F. oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:47:00 AM
:) awesome and beautiful my friend. Cindy Lu
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