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The Sea Took Him From Me

A wild wind howled, as belligerent emotions brewed deep inside of me. I raised a fist and screamed, "You dragged him down to your ocean floor!" I glared at the spew from the tumultuous waves of a dark and angry sea. Briny foam spit at my bare legs and feet as I cried upon the rocky shore. Thunder crashed! Lightning flashed! I stood alone in the cold downpour. 7/13/2016 One Stanza - One Only Broken Wings

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Date: 7/23/2016 9:50:00 PM
A fantastic write with dramatic visuals! Marti this is a great write! Congrats on your placement! Blessings!
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Date: 7/14/2016 9:15:00 PM
this is great work, mixing human emotions with the fury of the sea during a storm. WELL DONE.
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