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The Sea of Sorrow

All alone in the middle of pain- drowning in a sea of sorrow - a demented asylum of unmerciful distress- that destroys all hopes of tomorrow- these dark crashing waters- that are fueled by the rain- are destine to swallow me- in this cold sea called pain- my heart beats uncontrollably- as I frantically gasp for air- but my lungs are filled- and my cries are silenced- by the bitter waves of despair- where is the sun to dries these waters- and give long awaited relief- to a soul that's drowning in a deep sea of sorrow- pulled under by the currents of grief-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/25/2009 10:37:00 AM
I finally found you....very expressive. When will you post more?
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Date: 6/10/2009 4:10:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Ken. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2009 8:50:00 PM
a fine write! Ken! welcome to the soup!! James
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Date: 6/9/2009 8:00:00 PM
Wow @.@ that was magnetic death-pyramids crashing onto my fingers @.@ wow; it reminded me in the beginning to Emily Dickinson, yet while I kept reading words turned more desperate; awsome, thanks for the experience =D
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