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The Sea of My Life

The Sea of My Life ~~~~~~~~~~~~ The heaving waves are rising Each foaming at the crest For them there is no rest They go to any length To give a show of strength. It’s the sea of my life where no mercy is shown Dangers are hiding in corners unknown. I stand for my freedom; will not be a slave. It’s time to be counted. It’s time to be brave. For me this is the moment To save my place on earth To prove what I am worth Because I’m in the right I will put up a fight. It’s the sea of my life where no mercy is shown Dangers are hiding in corners unknown. I stand for my freedom; will not be a slave. It’s time to be counted. It’s time to be brave. Let the water keep on turning Let it rage and swirl and pound For tomorrow when it’s dawning It will die without a sound. It’s the sea of my life where no mercy is shown Dangers are hiding in corners unknown. I stand for my freedom; will not be a slave. It’s time to be counted. It’s time to be brave. It’s the sea of my life where no mercy is shown Dangers are hiding; I face them alone. I stand for my freedom and fight what is wrong. It’s time to be daring. It’s time to be strong. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Contest:I Got Zero, Nothing, Nada-1 Sponsor Broken Wings Previous contest judged 13th June, 2016

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/13/2016 10:40:00 AM

Wow, this sounds like an old fight song! Or maybe a song hardy sailors would sing as they got under way :^D Very nice lyrics here Paul, I think you should definitely mic up and post some audio so we can hear you sing it! That would be awesome! Good job!! P.S. Thanks for reading so much of my work and providing feedback. I've been writing poetry for over 20 years, but I still feel I have a ways to go. MC

Paul Callus
Date: 10/13/2016 11:33:00 AM

Hi MC! To be honest I had given up writing poetry, and only started again just over 2 years ago; in the meantime I was busy writing lyrics for songs. We never stop learning...and that applies to me too:) Thank you for your meaningful visits. By the way...you would not want to hear me singing...terrible voice:) Regards // paul

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/16/2016 8:10:00 PM

Hello Paul, I'm very glad I caught this Lyric gem of yours. I can certainly see why you won the contest with this write. Superb Work for sure!! Your technique in constructing this Lyric is both compelling and powerful. And your message of hope and indomitable determination in this poem is both inspiring and unforgettable!! SEVEN/FAV absolutely!! Best Always, Gary

Laura Hay

Date: 7/14/2016 9:54:00 AM

What a very uplifting and positive vibe! Well done Paul, warm regards, Laura.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/14/2016 5:12:00 PM

Thank you, Laura. Always a pleasure to receive your feedback. ~ Warm regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2016 6:13:00 PM

well well, good to see someone ELSE recognized the worthiness of this one, Paul. I loved that contest Constance did for us.and happy to see this one of yours I had not seen before. CONGRATS

Paul Callus
Date: 7/9/2016 6:27:00 AM

Many thanks, Andrea. I suppose we all judge differently, which is a good thing in the long run! ~ Regards // paul

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 7/5/2016 12:23:00 PM

Paul, congratulations on your placement in Broken Wings' contest. The lyrics are singable, excellent. I have used three of your lines here in a cento called Embrace the Lines http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/embrace_the_lines_806292 If you have an objection, please let me know.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2016 4:14:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely feedback re my poem, Reason. Of course, I have no objection to you making use of some of my lines; in fact I have already read your cento and the end result is excellent. ~ Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/5/2016 10:51:00 AM

Hi Paul, You penned some powerful and thought provoking lyrics. I agree with the others below you should write more lyrics because you write good lyrics! Congrats on you win it was well deserved 7:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2016 4:28:00 PM

Thank you for your generous comments and high rating, Alexis:) Always a pleasure to receive visits from you. ~ Regards // paul

Jai Bankson

Date: 6/15/2016 11:59:00 PM

I love the rhythm and rhyme.The flow.''No Chains''Take care;Jai

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2016 12:47:00 PM

Thank you for your feedback, Jai. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/2/2016 2:46:00 PM

Excellent lyric my lovely friend. A journey of life with courage and hope. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Paul Callus
Date: 6/3/2016 11:20:00 AM

Your encouraging comments are always a pleasure to read, BL; thank you. ~ Regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/28/2016 11:35:00 PM

G'day Paul ... a fine lyric set Paul. Certainly one of your many talents - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 6/3/2016 11:18:00 AM

You're too kind, Lindsay...thank you! Have a nice weekend. // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/26/2016 4:49:00 AM

Wonderful lyric with an inspiring message:) Love the last line:)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/26/2016 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for liking both lyrics and message within, Jo. ~ All the best....paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/26/2016 12:41:00 AM

Some call it repetition ... but I call it encouragement :) I will say "side I wasn't aware of" instead ... you should share lyrics more often, since you are very good at them. I used to write a lot of lyrics too (perhaps dozens instead of hundreds), but then started delving into the poetry world more.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/26/2016 7:10:00 AM

Welcome back Timothy:) You wrote dozens of lyrics...by the time you reach my age you could have hundreds and more!! Mind you, lyrics for songs are not quite the lyric form in poetry; they tend to be more commercial, depending a lot on a good refrain. I have friends who write excellent song-lyrics, but they admit that they can't write poetry! ~ paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/25/2016 8:16:00 AM

Excellent lyric and well penned Paul. You deserve it. Best wishes for the contest

Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2016 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Ravi...'excellent' does not come easy:) All the best...paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/24/2016 4:44:00 PM

I am speechless... just a perfect as every write you present ;) you're awesome Paul, always a pleasure to read.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2016 11:17:00 AM

You are too kind, Casarah:) I wonder why the same words as yours cross my mind when I read your works!! Thank you, and have a nice day! // paul

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/24/2016 3:31:00 PM

This is superb!! Your words (and form and rhyme!) are always so perfect.. Hope this does really very well in the contest!! :) :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 3:49:00 PM

You are not only a good writer, but also a good critic, Sneha! Thank you:)) // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2016 3:17:00 PM

Your words pronounce determination and reason to fight for a worthy cause Paul. I can hear the power packed music to these lyrics in my mind! Wonderful! #7 ; )

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 3:36:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Connie! I hope that Ryan will choose some of these entries and put them to music; he's got several good recordings on his page. ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2016 1:22:00 PM

a strong, radiant melody that truly allows us to be free...wow, mine pales in comparison to yours, paul... huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, Nette; I love your comments:) I read your entry, and though it's different to mine, it does not mean that it's any worse!! I enjoyed the poetical feel to it. Hugs // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/24/2016 11:58:00 AM

I feel as though I'm getting a different side to you, Paul ... and I'm loving what I'm seeing. There is strength and determination, as well as anger for justice, long ignored. Packs a needed punch with the repetition, too. A worthy contender.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 3:25:00 PM

I don't want to sound repetitive, Timothy, but you would make a very good critic! Glad you like the 'new side' to me:) In reality I like lyrics (in fact I have written a few hundred), but I've only posted a couple on this site; I have been experimenting on other forms since I joined this community. Thank you for a pleasant visit. Regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/24/2016 10:11:00 AM

hi Paul i must say you brought me to the depths and bounds of the beautiful reflection of the sea that touches life itself in many ways... I like it that you keep the first line of the chorus yet you changed some other lines which gives variation and further enhance the mood of the message but well you always do.. :) i miss writing. :D but can't focus yet... Hugs and smiles -olive eloisa :)?

Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/24/2016 11:59:00 AM

My muse has been shaky lately too, so I can relate ...

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 10:40:00 AM

Hi dear Olive_eloi!!! Your smile lights up my page:) So lovely to have you visiting and to know that you're all excited for D Day! You notice important details in these lyrics; also, the extra stanza in the last refrain gives the composer space for a key change. Do not worry about answering...I know how busy you must be...only 30 days to go..:) Take care ... Big hugs ~~ paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/24/2016 10:13:00 AM

I've read your mAil however im still gathering things to say so il be replying too in longer lunes hahaha you know... Its so near Paulnd am all excited and happy... God bless -Olive Eloisa:)

Judy Ball

Date: 5/24/2016 10:05:00 AM

This is a fine song and wish I could hear it sung. Love the message within. Life in general is not always fair and not always fun but it's always an experience. It's what you decide to learn from it that counts. Life is a dangerous area and must be approached with wisdom and caution but bravely. Great job. A seven from me. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 10:29:00 AM

Many thanks for your insightful feedback, Judy; meaningful comments are always appreciated. I am pleased that you found this poem to your liking. Blessings to you, too. ~ Regards // paul

Red Fiery

Date: 5/23/2016 11:18:00 PM

There is something about your poems..i read it more than two times and don't be surprised if i visit this poem of yours again:))) Sending you smiles across the globe and wishing you a BEAUTIFUL DAY!! I am faving it now :))))) Hugs ~ Red~

Paul Callus
Date: 5/24/2016 9:48:00 AM

You are sweet and generous, Red:) I'm so glad that you enjoyed these lyrics. Thank you! Smiles are always welcome, and yours have arrived like rays of sunshine across 9,870 kilometers:)) Hugs // paul