The Scream

Awake in a nightmare dream, reality can't keep pace. And like Munch's painting, "the scream," anxiety warps my face. Rank smells announce my coming, roaming the land of the blind. For folks reduced to slumming stink of sweat and piss combined. Draped in garbage bin fashion, I strut about ten feet tall. And though dirty and ashen, I'm invisible to all. Victim of hypocrisy, I'm treated like common trash. And despite democracy I have no rights; without cash. I'm more a myth mired in doubt, kept out of mind, out of sight. For a whisper cannot shout, and a ghost; evades the light.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/16/2018 4:51:00 PM

Powerful poem with very effective imagery of the well-known painting The Scream. "Victim of hypocrisy I’m treated like common trash. And despite democracy I have no rights without cash."

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2018 9:23:00 AM

Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.

Bob Atkinson

Date: 1/6/2016 8:46:00 AM

If sloth has no penalty, effort has no goal.

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2016 10:24:00 AM

Sloth is it's own penalty and effort is seldom enough. If gluttony has no limit, starvation is the results. Thanks Bob, I appreciate your commenting. Emile.

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/6/2016 12:33:00 AM

This works for me because it is so not you, Emile. Quite a departure, but shows the breadth of your descriptive prowess. A great write, in my humble opinion. Regards, Viv

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2016 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Viv, I appreciate your comments, and you're right, this is so not me. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2016 5:54:00 PM

this is deep and DARK, Emile. You gotta save it for the next deep dark contest. Great way to interpret that haunting picture!

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2016 8:25:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your friendly encouraging comments. Emile.

White Sage

Date: 1/5/2016 4:59:00 PM

nice write Emile...

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2016 8:26:00 AM

Thanks White Sage, I appreciate your visit. Emile.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/5/2016 11:44:00 AM

enjoyed the visceral quality of this gothic-like piece, emile... wow.. huggs

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/6/2016 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Nette, I truly appreciate your encouraging comments. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/5/2016 4:34:00 AM

This speaks so eloquent. Glad to drop by....thanks for sharing..........A.M.

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/5/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thanks Afolabi, your support is most welcome. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/5/2016 3:48:00 AM

Your poem speaks up loudly for those who suffer such plight. Excellent Emile! I have had 6 family members from Calif. Visiting the past two weeks, so I have missed many great poems like this one! I wish you a blessed 2016 dear friend. Blessings and love, Connie

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/5/2016 10:11:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie, your warm presence and friendly words are always most appreciated. Emile.

Joseph May

Date: 1/4/2016 10:59:00 PM

Powerful write Emile...well written...

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/5/2016 10:13:00 AM

Thanks Joseph, your visits are appreciated. Emile.

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 8:29:00 PM

an awesome ending.....Hugs* SKAT

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/5/2016 10:14:00 AM

Thanks so much SKAT, your visits are always a treat. Emile.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 6:28:00 PM

Art is not just a painting on some paper , no it has a deep meanings it can represent a whole different world of magnificent emotions , very well written my friend.....hugs / / :) dalia

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/5/2016 10:15:00 AM

Thanks Dalia, your visits are truly appreciated. Emile.