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The Scent of Your Soul

The scent of your soul a caramalized breeze of fruit odours reverbrating softly through my memory Throwing me right back in ninth grade where we sat side by side Your right arm reaching slightly for my back Your name resonates gently with my spirit as thoughts of you dwell in my mind Carrying me back to the shade of purple grape orchids in evergreen woods Our first kiss perched upon last autumn's twig still lingers in early morn's bone-china cup wafting its pungent aroma of dark roast coffee beans and so the smell of rubber tyres against the wind Such revoked moments of unknown danger and defiant fun Other moments of beauty and snow angels Of freedom and moonlights,sunrise and life I can still recall the days,months,and years till our footprints marked seperate paths Ah,those days,those last hours,How can I forget? Sweet as frosty vanilla and chocolate chips of an ice-cream parlour Melting as spongy marshmallows and honey syrup Fresh as the colour of every new dream which haunts me llike an alluring glance of almond-shaped eyes This afternoon,like other afternoons I walk to the library which knows the musky sweat of your palm upon my own That fragrance 's gone now,all that is left is the fading perfume of forgotten petals between old books and dust No one here except my silence ,and a rotten sliced apple vacuum packed,lacking its cinnamon and even its spice. Back home the mildewed strings of a guitar await my fingertips to play once more upon the worn out chords of my vacant heart What will I play,what will I sing,a song which isn't ours? Fermented wine I poured into a glass Yearning to taste its purple grape for what it was before all it was turned out bitter,acidic and sour I wondered about where you might be,distant or not as far Listening to my voice on once upon a record player Or Wishing on a star ?
A repost (written : 10/15/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/10/2015 1:42:00 PM
Perhaps, i read this poem earlier and forgot to comment. i smell here the feeling of nostalgia of the past. Beautifully expressed. 7+ i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 3/24/2015 7:09:00 PM
Lovely write Charma; since I'm a lead guitar player ---- I especially like the guitar line... Always, with affection, Keith:-)
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Date: 3/24/2015 6:55:00 AM
I enjoyed rereading this nostalgic piece Charmaine! I have a sudden urge to relive old memories.
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Date: 3/20/2015 5:16:00 PM
Wow, this is good. I can relate to this one.
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:33:00 AM
Always a pleasure to drop in to the soup and read you!! luv Michael
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Date: 3/19/2015 3:30:00 PM
ohhh, you knock me down in a most sweet way, charms... wowie!.. huggs
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Date: 3/18/2015 8:48:00 PM
I love the way you long for love, and the sincerity for moments that you cherish expressed with the sweetest spirit of sorrow and joy...nobody reminisces or celebrates companionship better than you Charma, that paseo to the library "Which knows the musky sweat of your palm upon my own..." great grityness and natural beauty in your desriptions, so very real...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:21:00 PM
Wow, such a wonderful journey to the past and all the warmth you brought back into your future. It must have been wonderful Anthony
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Date: 3/17/2015 12:55:00 PM
Excellent in both from and delivery. Your words paint a picture gently taking the reader to a private place in your heart, where your memories are happy ones filled with sensual delights. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/17/2015 3:58:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:22:00 AM
I love the pictures you chose. Good morning Charmaine.
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Date: 3/16/2015 6:38:00 AM
sorry charmaine not on site as much these days congratulations on a golden beautifully penned piece dear pal wishing you and your family a happy paddys day
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Date: 3/16/2015 2:08:00 AM
Charmaine, this beautifully written poem is a masterpiece written in true free verse. It contains depth, dramatic shades that seem to remain coloring your world. If this person could read this now, and understand its true significance they would be in awe as I am by how I am touched by your words. A magnificent poem so deserving of POTD, I hope to see it also garner POTW! Congratulations! I am fav'ing this gem. 7+ Brava!!
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Date: 3/15/2015 10:20:00 PM
Congratulationson Poem of the Day. It's a this magnificent write a 7 and a fav. Blessings
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Date: 3/15/2015 9:35:00 PM
Lovely dear Charma . . . I have powerful memories and can see, smell, and feel the past. Your words transcended time and then brought us back to reality.
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:38:00 PM
Thanks so much to all of you..much appreciated.I 'll visit your poems as soon as I can,and Thankyoi tps: )
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thankyou I meant: )
Date: 3/15/2015 6:26:00 PM
Charmed me! Sweet is the scent of your write, O poet! Melodious is the tone, never has a free verse been so captivating in all its fluid form, and though it changed inflection towards the end, as is the expected eventuality, it never lost it's unique hold, that is all your own. Love it!
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Date: 3/15/2015 1:58:00 PM
Beautiful write Charma... congrats.
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful, Charmaine...smells can quickly bring back memories and a myriad of emotions....congrats on being chosen TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:06:00 AM
This poem brings back wistful memories to me - I remember the first young woman who "came on" to me when I was in junior high. The fading perfume of forgotten petals - great line Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/15/2015 10:50:00 AM
A recording of rich whimsy and longing Charmaine, strong with emotion and wholesome desire that reaches out..'
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Date: 3/15/2015 9:01:00 AM
Your poem is very deserving of Poem of the Day. It is one of the best I have seen on this forum. One small hint: Nowadays the literary critics sneer at center justification. I'm not sure why, but it is so.
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Date: 3/15/2015 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of The Day. Excellent choice!
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on this gem being chosen poem of the day. A great choice for a repost. A Fav!
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Date: 3/15/2015 7:17:00 AM
Grats on being poem of the day with you and your fabulous descriptive words ;)
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