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The Scent of Your Feelings

The scent of your feelings clings 
To the fabric of my dreams
It never leaves….it lingers
Permeating everything
The scent of your feelings
Envelopes me

The fragrance of gardenia
When you are tender, sweet
Gentle and serene 
Tranquility showing through
In the gardenia scent of you

Seducing scent of jasmine
Surrounds you like an aura
Heavy, heady
Promising opulent luxury
Of flesh upon flesh
With you in control
Leading me deeper
Into the scent of your fantasies
Tantalizing, teasing, tempting
Endless jasmine ecstasy
Sensual and satiating
Is the jasmine scent of you

Perfumed in Damask Rose
Giving off the scent 
Of inner turmoil
Uncertainty, vulnerability
You are brooding and troubled
Guarded, disturbed
Needing to be reassured
Held in the strength of my arms
Quieted by my love
Till dawn’s light
When your safety is assured
And your scent finds release
Along with that of mine

Honey suckle perfume
Your need to nurture
To let me suckle
At your breasts
Your perfume speaking
In words my soul hears
That you live only
To care for my needs
Your perfumed hands
Soothing way the aches and pains
Of my rough and busy day
Honey suckle promises
Of womanly affection
In waves of comfort and light
I taste honey
Nectar that sweetens my lips
For I know it flows for me
I know I am nothing
A poor lost man
Without the fragrance of honey suckle
Wafting over me

Narcissus emotions
When there is venom in your eyes
Sparks fly all around me
And I know a storm is coming
A scent foreboding
Indicating the imminence
Of the unleashing of thunder and lightning
Torrents of rain
The scent of angered passion
I sense it
I smell your brewing storm
I’m unleashed in the elements
And yet….I know
How to harness your storm
How to bring calm
How to let you vent in my arms
Beat at my chest
I silence you with a kiss
Your arms pinned
The anger passes
Yet your 
Narcissus scent
Left on my chest
Leaves me shaken
In the aftermath
Of your storm

Orchid emotions
The perfume of surrender
Absolute abandon to my will
The sweetest fragrance
The tenderest emotion
A wilting flower
Waiting to be revived
Tenaciously wrapping around my body
Knowing its source of life, love, and happiness
Your scent moves me
Brings out my desires
To possess
To please and reward
To bring color to your petals
By my life giving stream
Lost in this scent
The most beautiful of all
The scent of surrender
To me

The scent of your emotions
Clings to my being
A perfumed eternity
In your arms

Eileen M Ghali

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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 11:07:00 PM
    Soup Mail

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 6:05:00 PM
    ok, wow wow wow from the wow bank, need I say more?

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Excelling descriptive art Eileen. I love the feelings it evokes while perusing it.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:11:00 AM
    really beautiful excellently penned piece

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 10:36:00 PM
    A great poem with a lot of imagination put into it. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/24/2013 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, my dear Lucilla. Always great to hear from you. Hope all is well! :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:11:00 AM
    Hi Eileen, A lovely sensual and yet erotic write.. Ken

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    The Greeks have three words for love agape...Godly love....philao...brotherly love....and eros...physical love...from which the word erotic is derived....So, physical love is beautiful and must be celebrated....
    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thank you, Ken. I'm glad that you liked it....
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Thought I was gonna pass out!!!!you know old ladies can't take this kind of excitement! Haha...oooo eeeee again....:-)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OH MD.....You are stronger than you think, honey bunny! ;) Yes.....a little excitement in life is wonderful, is it not???? Glad I can provide that!!! HA HA!
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Would seem my little Desert Orchid is out in full bloom with this write. Very imaginative poem indeed and very true how scents can open the mind to different emotions and memories. Take care, Richard

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Little Desert Orchid thanks you from the bottom of her little Orchid heart for your lovely words, Mr Seal. Blooming....yes, this write does seem to indicate that, doesn't it......Thanks for the visit. Always a welcome guest you are!!!!
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 4:57:00 PM
    a perfumed tour de force! I think this is one of the best poems I've read of yours so far; you really went all out on this one! funnily enough, I had a similar idea for a poem, but it remains unfinished in my file of (many) unfinished poems...I may finish it sometime, but I doubt anything I write could top this one! great work :)

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well, I'm so glad that one of my writes have touched you this way. I'm very very honored by your words of commendation, Charlotte. Thank you for the visit and for lifting my spirits. finish your poem...I have no doubt that you can top this in your own distinctive style and flavor! Hugs
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 4:48:00 PM
    This is like one of those letters that gets perfume sprayed on it. Well written

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a nice image you have produced in my mind, Justice! Thanks every so much! :) :) :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 4:43:00 PM
    How nice to be bach here reading your wonderful poetry Eileen. I thoroughly enjoyed this gem of a poem....Peter

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Pleasure is all mine, Peter. I do enjoy your visits and the encouragement you share! :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 12:40:00 PM
    I'm so impressed! I would never have come to the idea of "playing the male part" in this beautiful piece of theatre, playing games around floral scents! A masterpiece! Thank you for the collaborative work with Drake! You are such a blessed hear! Didn"t you put the poem into your own list? I'm looking for it! Hugs, Hanitra

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are ever so kind....Thank you, my dear. No....the poem is only posted in his wall....He is more popular you see....more coverage!!!! Hugs... ;-)
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Exquisite..How how beautiful this poem is and I love where each flower lead..My favourite of these flowers fragrance is the jasmine scent..I loove it..Great post

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I know you like Jasmine! :) I was going to go with lavender as well....I had to pick and choose which ones fit with my theme and which were the most fragrant. I love floral scents. I love pictures of flowers...I have a sweet friend who sends me links on FB of flowers....mostly purple ones, but any type of bouquet...Charmaine, when I'm depressed...and when my mind doesn't function...I click through those pics and find peace....My cover photo on FB is almost always some sort of flower arrangement...I also love sprays of fuchsia bougainvillea and wisteria dreams. Oh my...Hugs! Thanks for the visit.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:02:00 AM
    This is cool how you expressed passion from the male perspective.outstanding poem, 7777777 and another to my favorites.

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 11:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    By the way...I can't take too much credit for the concept of feelings being like a scent. That was something that was shared with me. I just loved the idea and decided to expand on the theme. :)
    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Richard. I'm glad I could get into a man's heart and mind with this one. :) I did quite a bit of research this afternoon trying to figure out which flowers carry which types of scents. It wasn't easy. I'm not a horticulturalist, but I do like floral scents. The signature scent I wear, Elie Saab, is floral mix. I do love it so...I'm on my second bottle and I so hate to see it diminish, but it does give me a boost when I wear it... :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:43:00 AM
    this smacks of total abandon to what is here and now, eileen... slow heat rising ro flamed desire ; stunning lines awaken my sense..:) huggs

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Nette...Must like a fragrance does. I love fragrances...I like to have a signature scent. I do go for the more overt ones. For a long time I loved to wear Yves Saint Laurent's PARIS...Beautiful...Now I wear Elie Saab...I like connected a scent with a person....So I stick to a scent for a while. This write was a pleasure to work on. Thanks for understanding the feelings I was trying to capture.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:29:00 AM
    "A perfumed eternity"...damn. Sensually eloquent. The best way to define this writing.

    Eszes Avatar Drake Eszes
    Date: 10/25/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I say, it's about friggin time. I stopped letting the ignoramus conform who I am...especially when they can't even identify themselves. Stay you -> Stay true.
    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YIPEEEEE!!!! :) Where has the world gotten to where a word like that can send one into orbit. I have no clue! ;) Thanks anyhow! Yes, I do like to write about sensuality as I am a very sensual person....Romance that leads up to that is also divine. I have decided to embrace who I am, and not mind if people like what I write or not in this genre. What do you say?
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 6:25:00 AM
    Eileen this is absolutely fantastic such imagery and depth of feelings This poem will live for ever adding to my favs well done what a tremendous pen Shadow x smile

    Celeste Avatar Jade Celeste
    Date: 10/22/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Shadow....this is your most delightful post ever! I am honored by your visit, your words, and your appreciation for this write. Hugs!