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The Scene

So lonely I was watching at shore the sands twirl And suddenly I saw a spirit across the sea I longed to touch it for I have missed dreaming but I couldn't even move so I closed my eyes And let it pass threw. Little voices I heard, flying birds up high Reminded me of life and that I am still alive They seemed so close but they were far away Behind the tree's I found beautiful creatures That thou never seen in real life nor fiction I saw colorful pandas with light blue eyes All together as a family we dined for nights They helped me pick fruits from trees Kept me warm at night with their fur hair And fish by morning and feed them as well Then one day a black creature ran right threw our shelter and killed everything even our hearts I ran away like a crazy person to save my soul never forgot a tear drop nor their cries after many nights hiding and screaming inside I left my place and went out to shore There were it all started 18/01/2017

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Date: 1/17/2017 5:31:00 PM
I loved the journey you took me on, but the ending did surprise me. Great job, Talin.
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