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The Same Gleaming Sky That David Saw

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pTURNAL SKY
Awesome, magnificent, infinite and grand these four beautiful words describe exactly the same gleaming sky that David saw when composing a poem to praise the Creator who used a command! Millions of years have passed and the breath-taking beauty of the wondrous stars and constellations never dawns; feel David's emotions as he penned down inspiring psalms! Don't we also lose ourselves in the sky's obscure immensity? Find a spot where every corner of the twinkling sky is seen clearly; look further into the boundless universe and grasp a sense of reality, then analyse it and revoke the absurd thoughts that failed as doubt... compare your faith to that of David who was happy to proclaim it! See the nocturnal spectacle that always vows us in every aspect; its so awesome when Mars appears with its rotating rings that simply draw our attention to impose true belief... so discard any false theory that all evolved by itself! Written on 3/27/ 2014 by Andrew Crisci for nette onclaud's contest, " A Night Sky "

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Date: 4/2/2014 5:45:00 PM
hi Andrew, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/2/2014 12:21:00 AM
ANDREW:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/1/2014 2:07:00 PM
from david to scientific theory.. you blended this so well ,andrew; impressive!.. a well-deserved win in my contest!.. best cheers with huggs!
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Date: 4/1/2014 3:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A NIGHT SKY - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud, Andrew ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:05:00 AM
Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, andrew
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Date: 3/27/2014 8:37:00 PM
wonderful, comparing that sky to the one of many years ago! I am not sure, but maybe this needs to be 16 to 20 lines for the contest. Anyway, I hope you make the list!
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