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In the town of Milton Creek the sun was starting to rise And Jenna was planning for Ranger David a lovely surprise Unbeknown to him preparations were now well underway To hold a party in his honour on this Saint Patrick's day. She, Anaya, Deb, Tania and Lin had decorated the saloon in green And to make it the best celebration that the 'Creek had ever seen David had often talked of Ireland and said one day he'd go back To see all his family and friends, drink guinness and enjoy the craic. But he was a long way from Erin, Milton Creek was now home He was well settled here now and would ne'er again roam Meanwhile at the far end of town three shady riders had rode in And stopped by the town bank but were seen by Sheriff Koplin. He felt uneasy and asked Deputy Terry to keep a watchful eye On any other other dodgy strangers who might be passing by Two of the strangers went into the bank; one waited outside Sheriff Koplin asked Rob at the livery to get horses ready to ride. The sound of gunshots brought Sheriff Koplin rushing to the bank One of the robbers was holding a hostage and his spirits sank He had a colt peacemaker aimed at poor old Ma Kelly's head Then there was an almighty loud bang and the robber fell dead. The other two threw down their guns along with bank bags too Where that well aimed shot had come from nobody knew Then out of the shadows Jenna appeared Winchester in hand Saying "I wasn't going to allow them a chance to make a stand" . Thankfully the drama was over and the two robbers were seized And Sheriff Koplin ordered them both to get down on their knees A crowd had now gathered and Sheriff Koplin feared a lynch mob Old Ma Kelly pleaded with the sheriff and Jenna to finish the job. Jenna said " we're not vigilantes, we'll let the judge decide And if anyone breaks the law here, there's no place to hide Taking hostages and bank robbing for these two there's no hope They'll probably end their day on earth at the end of a rope". Then from the direction of the bordello Ranger David appeared Looked the worse for wear holding his gun whilst rubbing his beard Said "what's all the shooting? it woke me from my deep sleep" Then saw the robber in the dust and added "who is that creep?". Mayor Tom arrived with a wagon to take the robber to Boot Hill And asked for two strong volunteers to dig a grave and to fill Jenna and the girls still had work to do and headed for the saloon And they hoped to get everything ready by late afternoon. That evening David entered Jenna's saloon and saw all the green In the corner Tania was sweetly singing the ballad of Annie Breen Ranger David was totally speechless and he didn't know what to say Jenna shouted out " this is for you David, happy Saint Patrick's day". written 23rd March 2023

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Date: 9/17/2023 9:46:00 AM
Neat story Tom. After reading this, I'm thinking how the ladies loved Ranger David, and he didn't realize it. It's actually a very sad story in a way. I did not see a recent work of yours, so I decided to work backwards. I am so glad you are here to lift my spirits.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/18/2023 10:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke, I'd written many Milton Creek poems, it started off as Soup Cree but we renamed it Milton Creek in honour of Milton Hankins who passed away last year. Tom
Date: 6/8/2023 10:52:00 AM
My good friend, your story telling is truly fantastic. This was a true pleasure to read and the way poetry is supposed to be presented. A shing jewel and a fav too. God bless.
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Date: 6/8/2023 2:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Robert I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks too for faving it, much appreciated. Tom
Date: 5/15/2023 7:50:00 PM
You created just the right atmosphere with this one. You kept us hanging on til the end. A lot for me to learn from this one Tom. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 5/15/2023 10:02:00 PM
Thank you very much David, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Hope you're keeping well.. Tom
Date: 5/15/2023 12:30:00 PM
Wow Tom, how did I miss this?! And, per Old Ma Kelly, great job Jenna! Crapola, old Ma Kelly had just gone to the bank for cash to buy the kids granola!! That was a close shave.whew! This had me laughing, and, I will go to Boot Hill soon and lay some thorns on that robbers grave ;)
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Date: 5/15/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thank you very much BJ, I'm happy you enjoyed the humour and continuing saga of Milton Creek. Tom
Date: 4/30/2023 11:39:00 AM
I've so missed reading the adventures at Milton Creek, and so so so sad to read Milton passed away . may his memory live on in works like this. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/30/2023 3:07:00 PM
I keep seeing comments from him that i never replied to in my absence from soup, lost too many lovely poets on here and it makes me sad:-( x
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Date: 4/30/2023 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Jan, lovely to see you here again, you've been missed. Such a shock to hear Milton had passed away. Tom
Date: 4/27/2023 4:07:00 PM
hi, there. Where have you been, Tom? I was hoping to see an April posted poem from you. Anyway, I see you got a potd for this one, so big congrats on that. And thanks for visiting my poetry recently
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Date: 4/28/2023 1:39:00 AM
Morning Andrea, I was away recently in Greece but back now. Haven't had much inspiration of late. But I'll see if I can come up with something. Tom
Date: 4/25/2023 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun write/story/picture. I hope you are OK. I wish you would write more. I miss reading your wonderful/fun writes. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Date: 4/25/2023 8:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit Paula, I'm just back from Rhodes and hoping to get back in the saddle soon. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 4/17/2023 8:32:00 AM
As always, Tom, I couldn't wait to find out how it turned out at the end. Reading every word, visualizing every line. Another wonderful old west story! Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 4/17/2023 10:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandra, im happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 4/10/2023 4:46:00 AM
Hi Tom, hope you are doing well, just dropped by to say Hi!
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Date: 4/10/2023 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Joanna, dealing with a few issues at the moment but apart from that all good. Hope you had a lovely Easter weekend. Tom
Date: 4/1/2023 2:58:00 AM
Well Tom I knew you got POTD after i finished reading the next episode of this intense ongoing historical event, and I wasn't wrong. Big Congrats for this epic write, no need to listen to the news any more about the Ukraine, just follow your poems! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/1/2023 2:57:00 PM
Thank you very much for your return visit Jennifer, I watch the news about Putins war and will continue to call that dog out. Watch this space. Hope you're keeping well and enjoying your weekend. Tom
Date: 3/28/2023 9:28:00 PM
really it's like a thrilling and adventurous story!! great to read; congrats for POTD
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Date: 3/28/2023 11:51:00 PM
Thank you for your congrats Mahtab, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Enjoy your day. Tom
Date: 3/28/2023 3:23:00 PM
Hello Tom, I like the happy ending. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/29/2023 12:04:00 PM
Hello Tom, Yes i enjoyed the story of Milton Creek. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 3/28/2023 11:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Darlene, I'm pleased that you enjoyed the story of Milton Creek. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Date: 3/27/2023 4:56:00 AM
Very cute! As always a great story to ride through! Congratulations on POTD, Tom!
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Date: 3/27/2023 5:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Kim, I'm pleased you enjoyed the continuing story of Milton Creek. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/26/2023 2:28:00 PM
Hi Tom, I loved how you weaved this delightful poem. Belated congrats on POTD. I was wondering if the character Jenna was our little poetess. Great read.
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Date: 3/26/2023 2:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Nancy. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Yes, it's Jenna Logan, saloon owner and a mean shot with a Winchester repeating rifle lol. Tom
Date: 3/26/2023 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Tom, you really are a famous reporter of the ongoing tragic murderous war wagered against the Ukranians by Putin and the Russian army. I think you should start putting your book together! blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/26/2023 9:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Jennifer, while the phycho continues so will I, Ukraine will win this war of that I am certain. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/26/2023 6:18:00 AM
Great story Tom so very well told, with nice rhyme and flow too. Hope all is well with you blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 3/26/2023 7:26:00 AM
Thank you very much Gordon, glad that you enjoyed it, all well with me and I hope you are keeping well too. Tom
Date: 3/25/2023 11:56:00 PM
Hi Tom, another thriller story of adventure and victory, bringing out your exceptional story telling skills ! Milton Creek is vigilantly guarded by the smart team under Mayor Tom. Congratulations on your great POTD.
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, the first write in ages as I'd lost inspiration., I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 3/25/2023 11:47:00 PM
The tales continue! Always entertaining and enjoyable to read, Tom. Congratulations on another POTD! May peace of mind be with you my friend, Bill
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Bill, im happy you enjoyed the continuing saga of Milton Creek, hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/24/2023 10:57:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Wish you the best on the way.
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Bhoomi, wish you a lovely weekend too. Welcome to poetry soup Tom
Date: 3/24/2023 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:17:00 AM
A third visit I'm honoured Victor have a great weekend. Tom
Date: 3/24/2023 9:25:00 PM
Hi Tom, Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a great weekend;-) Alexis
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:15:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis, I hope everything is well with you. Enjoy your weekend too. Tom
Date: 3/24/2023 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done indeed! Have a great weekend my friend:-)
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Anne, I hope you have a lovely weekend too. Tom
Date: 3/24/2023 6:33:00 PM
Tom, absolutely wonderful, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Constance, goad you enjoyed it. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 3/24/2023 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Mayor Tom! You are a superb story-teller! Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/24/2023 6:11:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congratulations Mala, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 3/24/2023 12:31:00 PM
Jenna's made sure the robbers gotta dubbin just get out of the way when Milt's Creek meets Dublin. I say, yippy-ki-A and Erin go braugh! Tom if this had been a western series, you'd surely find fame and riches! Congratulations on POTD! Robert
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Date: 3/24/2023 1:37:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Robert, she sure did, she's a mean shot with that Winchester, she'd give Annie Oakley a run for her money. If Hollywood want to buy the rights I'm listening lol. Tom
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