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The Sage of Time

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The Sage of Time

The hidden script hidden inside his ribs,
prophecies screeching out of his limbs,
prophecies which create a universal theology,
a philosophy of the sage of time.,

The sage who traveled through time to change the course of wrath of human kind,thus the wrath came to an end as the pinhole of light shined its might!.,

Human kind lived in peaceful harmony thy the sage of time could never live in totally harmony as its his path to travel through universal time lines and create balance where every living thing is connected as one sequence,

although time after time, 
the sage forgotten his universal rhyme,
only to find himself floating in a river of lime!.

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  1. Date: 8/3/2011 1:49:00 PM
    Thanks all, very kind indeed. Doris Culverhouse - You are right!, I need to learn how to make my work more readable. I appreciate your concern.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 1:34:00 PM
    I like it. It is really good

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 11:54:00 AM
    I don't know if you can see it but there are two long lines in your work that makes it hard to read. I have had that problem before. to fix it I had to go and put in extra spaces and hit the enter key some more. the lines, "The sage" and "Human kind lived" are the long ones. very nice work though!!