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The Sadness of Grief's Death

The Sadness of Grief’s Death tears, wretchedness of an all consuming sadness, emotional cannibalism devouring the host draining the will to live, to breathe, crushing the reality of memory’s dust. grief, crowded desolation of an empty room hints, contours, shaping vacant chairs, aromatic kisses wafting on the air shrieks of melancholy’s mournfulness – unheard. death, stalker of the living’s life greedy to take that which he never felt denying those who come to know his need for death is not the worst thing to happen - to the grieving it is just the last. 7/26/2016 submitted to – Three Stanzas-Three Only – Poetry Contest sponsor – Broken Wings

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Date: 8/2/2016 10:56:00 AM
Wow! Great write John, "to the grieving...Just the last" congratulations...
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John Lawless
Date: 8/2/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, a difficult topic to write about.
Date: 7/27/2016 12:46:00 PM
Dynamic, John - a real 'thinker' ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 8/2/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thanks CayCay
Date: 7/27/2016 8:26:00 AM
Very deep observation of a very sad situation John. You have expressed it very well.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/2/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you Daniel
Date: 7/27/2016 8:17:00 AM
- Deep and great written with words that describe the feelings very well, John - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 8/2/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, with age comes a greater understanding of these three conjoined demons.

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