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The Sadness

The Sadness A Poem by Debbie_Philly The Sadness Closing in like an eclipse on a sunny day bright with future remaining the figment of my imagination left with murky interpretation Beauty is a fading blackness that surrounds empty spaces, walls closing, life imploding as does my view holding tight to every memory through the mind is a pin hole of light half filled with hope just enough to hold on to Run fast towards the opening before the dimming tell the stories write it all down before the dark takes over ascending like a virus ..... climb out of the dark emptiness stomping out the sadness. Deborah Kelly ( Debbie Philly) 9/24/13

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Date: 2/3/2014 4:19:00 PM
Wow this is a deep and powerful poem! Man Debbie this one is great. I love the imagery and eeriness to it! great write Debbie, xoxo :)
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/3/2014 11:19:00 PM
Thank you again Chris so much.. I'm really glad you like my writing..... I write really when I'm inspired... or when Im feeling something... and I was feeling it that night :) Thanks again !

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