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The Sad Fool

so fool to be that sad think of all the great things u've once had do not surrender like an obedient child fight the world ,forget about those who lied everything is fast moving so don't stop & say i cant go on there is no place between us for those who can't hold on be like the knights & fight inside the war knights who never regret what they've lived & died for don't hide behind a wall & say i did my best think for your tomorrow & leave out all the rest just take your way forward & never look behind feel the clarity inside u ,feel you pure mind remove the curtains away from your eye stand again & give your broken wings a try cause nothing yet deserve to make u say that early good bye ..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/3/2010 7:19:00 AM
this is a great poem and it seems carefully written good one!
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Date: 12/1/2009 8:46:00 AM
Excellent poem!!! Another great read, thank you for your kind comment, take a look at my poem, A Clarity Of Vision, love Simone
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Date: 9/30/2009 6:49:00 PM
Keep on keeping on! Very well penned. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/28/2009 8:09:00 AM
this is a very lovely poem good write.......always kate
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Date: 9/28/2009 5:56:00 AM
lovely thoughts just lovely. Light & Love and soup mail
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:13:00 AM
Noura Im in the chat if your around
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Date: 9/23/2009 4:12:00 AM
This is a great write powerful and true you have atrue gift one of the better poems ive read in awhile love the message in it keep writting
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Date: 9/21/2009 10:48:00 AM
you could be really amazing. keep working at it <3 rain
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:50:00 AM
Sorry about the repeat on the comments. I thought that it did not go thru. Sara
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:49:00 AM
Like the next to last line. Good advice. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/17/2009 3:29:00 PM
Interesting. Sara
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Date: 8/17/2009 12:26:00 PM
Good afternoon Noura. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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