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The Sad Day

The twins are dying Both of them are just crying Falling funeral

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/22/2009 2:12:00 PM
hmmm sigh...not sure? Light & Love
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Date: 9/18/2009 10:49:00 AM
a nice metaphoric write here Savannah. the last line is my favorite part of the write!
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Date: 9/17/2009 7:25:00 PM
Sad to hear about the twins, or is this a metaphor of the twin towers...Godspeed...Raul
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Date: 9/17/2009 7:21:00 PM
Sad day indeed, sympathetically, may God bless, Sincerely Moses
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