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Dedicated to my dear friend Mystic Rose, whom has inspired me to venture forward 

Into boundaries unexplored terriorties of thought. She is a wonderful lady of grace and

Loving kindness, a soul sister of the heart and mind. I thank you with this one of my best works,

Chosen randomly by my hubby, I'm glad it landed with your number my friend. But their is 

Something else I chose to say on this work, I don't know if everyone knows but I am a proud to be part Native American. Now this is a spirtual tribute to a legendary totum, at Halloween, I hope 

You enjoy my this work, it is one of my personal favorites, and I dedicate to my native american tribe, the Lakota. I am posting this poem earily because I must work in the morning at 5 am this is yours also Mystic Rose enjoy.

Hear the screeching of the Nighthawk, as its talons grapple At the tail ends of the moon's rising, dragging it ever upwards, unto The center of the blackened shroud, of the universe. This celestial light casts illusion's rays upon the sacred totem, Transforming wooden carvings, bringing these honored beings to life, Wood yields unto flesh and bones desire to enter our realm of reality. Nay the tribal medicine man, bows and grovels low unto them, These spiritual sacred brethren of the earth and sky, chanting In native tongue, welcoming them once more unto the land of the living. By tooth and claw, taking winged flight, may the elemental essence, Bless thee, and nature itself give strength to sustain thee, so does the Tribal elder chant, on the whispering winds, that echo from the Highest Mountains. Even do these rock giants, seam to bow, unto these deities of the Supernatural realm, one by one, that come forth, the great eagle to soar, The mighty bear to guard and defend, the alone wolf to watch over His tribal flock and the Wiley coyote with his cunning, and stealth. Then last but not least the wisest of them all, the ancient being the owl, Whom listens in the night, hearing all secrets, but when asked his eyes Do so flash, answering only one word's echoing, who. Running free amongst the living, these sacred beings reveled in Such wonderful freedom, to feel the warmth of the earth beneath their Paws once more, to feel the winds currents beneath their wings, What proud creatures of the neither realm, to join again To live once more amongst the world of men. But at dawn's rising a maiden dressed in sacred white skins did Appear, calling unto them to return therein, to the totem once more. All came willingly, except for the Wiley Coyote, for a spirit Of trickery, is he, nay did he refuse to go. At this response she the maiden dressed in white skins, placed Her hands in the air, and began a sacred incantation's chant, And low did appear within her hands grasping, but a glowing dream Catcher that seemed to burn with an ethereal fire. Made of vaporous mists, it shimmered and hissed, as if it were A rattle snake poised to strike, the coyote back into a thicket of wild Sharpened thorns, daring it to try and take him. Again she beckoned him return unto for which you came, Back into thy sacred totem. But the Wiley coyote would not listen, the maiden Spoke with venomous malice, then shaking the dream Catcher, she spoke fetch him. Hissing, again the dream catcher, grabbed at him, Dragging him back within the sacred totem, now thee Shall stay always my Wiley friend, all the others may Run free unto the next mornings dawning, Then all was still, and silent as the sun Rose on the distant horizon. The maiden vanished; the people were at peace once again, But the Wiley coyote cries from within the sacred totem, never To be released from his wooden prison. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/8/2014 3:58:00 PM
Your verse is always a joy to read as your career grows please do not lose your friends on soup. Congrad's on your win!Light & Love
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Date: 11/7/2014 7:21:00 PM
Congrats, Cherl, on a wonderful win! A beautiful poem to dedicate to a beautiful lady!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/7/2014 6:36:00 PM
Mystic Rose is a wow.. :) she is my big sister here.. :) you poems is just wonderful.. :)! kudos.. :D
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Date: 11/7/2014 3:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win Cheri.
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Date: 10/19/2014 3:36:00 PM
powerful pen cherl a delightful in reading beautifully painted piece
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:07:00 PM
Another awesome write, Cherl; you amaze me how you manage to find so much material for these types of poems. The images you draw are expressive, they come alive and 'jump' out of the page in a 3 dimensional format. Well done. // paul
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Date: 10/18/2014 9:38:00 PM
Cheri, A quite wonderful write here!! A quite exquisitely articulated "Fangoria" masterpiece. These types of writes you do so very well (as always). A big "7" here for the "Queen of Darkness." Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 10/18/2014 4:07:00 PM
I agree with the girls, you had me intrigued and involved in the play. “ AWESOME” :) eve
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Date: 10/18/2014 2:37:00 AM
I am glad I got to read this fantastic story with vivid imagery.I could visualize the maiden with all her powers and the Wiley Coyote trying to escape her grab.Excellent,Can see this story being made into a movie.Awesome!
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Date: 10/17/2014 9:55:00 PM
I like how you put his cries inside the totem. Such a mystical piece this is. Something creepy about some of those ancient beliefs! Perfect for the Halloween season, Cherl. You are a storehouse of supernatural descriptions.
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