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Forth from the heaven, from the misty moorlands of all sacred woodland greens, drop by drop by striking the pebbles and untouched vegetations oozes, the intoning hallowed water of evergreen woods' crystal cascades, brooks and streams. to adduce the onus lies on doomed humanity to be the savior of the sanctum woods', to rue, who paid no reverence yet to the venerated water of sanctified copse! The immaculate sheer nectar drops while rippling through the hills and meadows, preserved by the rustic folks absolutely isolated from the frenzy reserved mobs. Alas! The competitors of rat race, the votaries of somber brandish feverish blogs, are not blessed even to taste a single ambrosial drop, ordained for the harmless folk. On the edge of the forest, the celestial cascades are crooning from the bamboos and ferny rocks, as the drops from the paradise on the down hills, giggles and rumbles piercing the lavish green dense groves, ripples on the solitary cobbles, lush ferns and drifting logs, stricken the awaiting crinkling rubbles. twirling and rhyming along the wistful wind, caressing the sparkling gleeful wild robes. The chirruping water, emanating from unknown, of those heavenly abodes sacred falls. looks like the silver tears tracks on the deciduous evergreen face of the mounted moulds' aromatic slopes. The pellucid pools at the bottom are varnished so crystal clear with ferns, petals and wildflowers, tasted immense sweet and pure, can't be earthly, while spurting over the fluorescent pebbles and whispering rocks: Gushing, surging, plunging down the ridges, to prove the sight, taste and roar of the elysian locks. While rambling, astounded to behold the flux of preserved pristine woods' divine drops, cascading down from the wild ridge like the emerald lush green biomes' pores. on whose unsullied touch, hails to germinate the spasmodically lying wild scattered seeds zygotes, sluicing, springing down slowly through bamboos and moulds leafy green slippery slopes, amazed to brood, "how those drops are being guarded by the rustic naive folks, to bid adieu to the votaries of greed and plunderers of untarnished woods of sublime drops!" The fluorescent rocks and thick moos so untainted concealed from the unfaithful polluted souls, pitch by pitch, purging softly to touch the uncontaminated Godly vegetation hailed by the sacred drops! The lone odysseys of Silpika @ Solitary woods This poem was composed, a year back in the sacred woodlands of a remote region.

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Date: 2/13/2023 10:39:00 AM
Silpika, having just read your works i must say they are captivating, and transporting. Very clever pen work. Hits the spot !
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Date: 4/27/2022 10:08:00 AM
Paul in his comment below echoes my sentiments - I felt transported to an age and time of no strife, just calm and serenity and your intense imagery is surely a gift to you from God. Be blessed always Silpika. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/27/2022 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Jennifer, I am honoured and blessed by your splendid encouraging review ... Love, hugs, warm greetings and blessings
Date: 4/23/2022 8:22:00 PM
Silpika, I am carried away--transported to a nature-sweet clime-- by the imagery, flow, beauty, word-usage, energy, water-laden air, and crashing sound of this magnificent poem. With luck, it will be in my dreams. Oh, how deeply I am in your debt. Hugs, Paul
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Date: 4/23/2022 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Paul for your splendid encouraging review, Indeed, a dream comes true place and it's an honour for me to get feedback from you.... Hugs, Silpika
Date: 1/17/2022 12:05:00 PM
Silpika, LOVE THIS, another fav. Ci do get your poetic prose style. Check my poems Waterfalls and Red River Gorge. I also understand your creative play with language. What would you think of us collaborating on a poem. We could aim for the duet contest if we have beginner’s lock…soupmail me…
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Date: 1/18/2022 6:20:00 AM
It will be an honor for me to collab with such a versatile poet like you, will definitely give a try... stay connected... Hugs Silpika
Date: 1/16/2022 7:50:00 PM
SILPIKA, There is so much here it takes my breath away . . . stunning imagery, a compelling message, exotic word usage, and a marvelous sense of movement consistent with that of a waterfall. By any measure, a "keeper" composition. Thank you for sharing it. Hugs, Paul
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Date: 1/17/2022 1:56:00 AM
Thanks dear Paul, just penned a year back in a secluded remote forest while sitting in a driftwood when the inspiration was spontaneous.... Hugs Silpika
Date: 1/7/2022 12:06:00 PM
Goodness! Such line structures! Magical! To mine faves!
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Date: 1/14/2022 3:44:00 AM
Oh thanks Marshall, appreciate the applaud a lot. Wish you a blissful year ahead
Date: 1/1/2022 1:33:00 PM
Incredible and beautiful poem Silpika! I hope you have a blessed New Year and that your beautiful gift of poetry keeps pouring forth your amazing poems <3
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Date: 1/14/2022 3:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for such splendid review and the beautiful wish for the year ahead, I also wish a graceful year ahea.... Silpika
Date: 12/22/2021 2:01:00 PM
"THE SACRED DROPS" is a wonderful/beautiful write. I wish you would write more. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/23/2021 11:42:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate the read and the splendid review. My best regards
Date: 12/17/2021 6:51:00 AM
Silplka, hello! Goodness but I am excited to meet you and your work. The poetic prose is composed VERY like my approach as I posted Before this past Sept, except I did not even put in commas. My first pub. Work in 1982 was like this, experimental prose-poetry. I tried to pick Fav stanzas from this but couldn’t choose of those past the 1st. Great to meet someone with a deep love of language!
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Date: 12/23/2021 11:43:00 PM
Hello Sally, my fortune to meet you in thi s wonderful forum with such aesthetic taste of poetry. Happy to see your presence. ... Silpika
Date: 12/16/2021 6:28:00 PM
Astounding poetry, so rich and beautiful.
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Date: 12/23/2021 11:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Harry for the read and the wonderful review. Regards
Date: 12/7/2021 3:37:00 PM
You were really in your element when You composed this poem, enjoying such beauties of nature. VERY descriptive!
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Date: 12/7/2021 4:09:00 PM
Ample thanks dear Andrea, just love the review... Hugs Silpika
Date: 12/6/2021 3:23:00 PM
Wow, Silpika, you're an incredible artist. In some ways, it was a fantastic resource into the mindfulness that one should undergo before anyone can produce such beautiful sentences.
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Date: 12/6/2021 3:57:00 PM
Honoured by those words, thank you for the appreciation.. regards Silpika
Date: 12/5/2021 4:38:00 PM
You chose a beautiful waterfall as the image above your poem, Silpika. It was a welcoming invitation into the meditation on must experience to reach the depth of awareness necessary to allow such sacred words to flow. Just reading your offering was a gift of peace of mind. thank you for sharing the wonderful gift of poetry you have been given, with us. Blessing ~Smiles Bill
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Date: 12/6/2021 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Bill for those golden words and warm blessings. appreciate the review and the presence.. Silpika
Date: 12/5/2021 11:42:00 AM
You certainly write with a poetic charm and knowledge of your subjects chosen, you understand and write poetry with a magnetic might and mesmerize your readers. You have enormous talent, and must have taken after someone in your family - you are an aesthete, i would choose to call you a connoisseur of poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 12/5/2021 1:41:00 PM
I am speechless Jennifer to get such a splendid review, especially from those few whom I look as inspirations. Extremely glad to hear from you Jennifer...hugs
Date: 12/4/2021 10:14:00 PM
Great prose, you described a splendid place that is full of imagery. It makes one yearn to visit. Well done. ~~
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Date: 12/5/2021 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Victor, appreciate your presence always, glade you like the sacred drops... Silpika
Date: 12/4/2021 9:04:00 PM
With its incredible imagery, your beautiful poem is such a pleasure to read, Silpika. A masterpiece!
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Date: 12/5/2021 7:40:00 AM
Dear Evelyn thank you so much for those splendid words and colossal thanks for your colossal homage as masterpiece.
Date: 12/4/2021 7:32:00 PM
Your eye for beauty, for the detail in the splendor of nature, and penning it in an intriguing way, is a wonder to me, Silpika. Stunning write! :) Gershon
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Date: 12/4/2021 8:12:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, it was an effortless compilation for me at the serenity magical moment of , Always love the spectacular ones, this time Wonder... Silpika
Date: 12/4/2021 7:28:00 PM
I have been travelling along the course of this falling cataract from the beginning till the end, from the ridges as it starts its journey down through the slippery rocks, gushing and gurgling and merging finally with the lush green woods. Fantastic Silpika !
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Date: 12/4/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thanks dear Valsa, spectacular review with the amazing words to track the gist.. as magical as your pen.. Hugs Silpika
Date: 12/4/2021 6:03:00 PM
After a dry spell the rain injects new life into the dying vegetation, stunning imagery Silpika. So well written. Tom
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Date: 12/4/2021 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Tom, so glad you like, sometimes I feel, in the remoteness of nature the inspiration is spontaneous. I was sitting in a driftwood and was compiling in the wilderness... Silpika

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