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The S Words

Sensual , seductive, slender : smiling siren She sits silently staring : seeing sapphire skies Sun’s scarlet shadows , slowly sinking silhouettes Shining stars sprinkling skylines : systematically Sunday sermon speaking : Searching souls singing Songs , seeking : SALVATION

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/9/2013 4:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win~A.O

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2013 8:03:00 PM

Hi Daniel, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/5/2013 10:26:00 AM

another winner bro, well done xx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/13/2012 8:53:00 PM

Very nice! Always, Laura

James Peranteau

Date: 1/10/2011 4:32:00 AM

Thankx for this second look at this write Mr. HGarvey ! Brilliant and worth sending to mine favz ! much love, james

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/20/2010 6:04:00 PM

some of your "s" words at the beginning are romantic! and the restare so wonderful(: i l ike them all, Harry. much love to you. -Always&Forever Lynn

James Peranteau

Date: 5/19/2009 6:38:00 PM

HGarvey,...typo-o on my comment,..mat is of,...don't eeeeeeeeeeeven ask how I did that,...*smiles*

James Peranteau

Date: 5/19/2009 6:35:00 PM

You had me at the pew HGarvey,..and wondering if that gift from Jehovah would ever look my way ! What a beautiful way to make me remember,..how I could not understand that sunday sermon! *smiles*,..this is my minds flight mat your write HGarvey,..forgive me if I've flown off! Hey,..our writes are our writes, right?....james great one !

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/10/2009 1:30:00 PM

That is grandious! Wonderful alliteration. God bless you. Reading this poem certainly has blessed me. Love, DAS-J

Christy Hardy

Date: 4/23/2009 3:13:00 PM

AWESOME.....always, Christy

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/31/2009 8:35:00 AM

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/31/2009 8:34:00 AM

Excellent Alliteration, HG! Such a delight to read and I love how you ended this with SALVATION! In the end that matters most! :) Love, Robin

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/20/2009 6:02:00 AM

Dear brother HG, my poems are new placements from old writes, I have my long lag too. The love that flows here make want to feel and share, glad I could share with you on your own words. One day through sibalant showers of joy you will hear again that salvation is everything - man becoming like God again - creators in the image of the Eternal. Thanks, lots of love, the door for dialogue forever opens.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/14/2009 4:32:00 PM

HG..Simply Stunning..Barbeeg. Barbara jean

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/14/2009 7:07:00 AM

Wow. One of the best, if not the best alliteration I've read! Amazing! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/14/2009 12:55:00 AM

Alliteration at its best, great write, very creative...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2009 9:43:00 PM

HG, I've never seen such superb style of alliteration! OK - 4 "s" words were all I could muster. I'll be sending you a Soup Mail regarding my poetry deletions. Love, Carolyn

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/13/2009 9:33:00 PM

Dang who knew you could do so much with an "S". Great fun HG

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/13/2009 9:02:00 PM

This is just flat out cool! It all flows so nicely together and it is all found in just this one letter. Wonderful talent is shown here. A true gift. I am anxious to read more of your writing. Smiles from Lolita