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The Rythem of You

I slip between the sheets gently not wishing to wake you. Carefully I snuggle up beside you nuzzeling into your neck where it is tender and warm. I breathe in the aroma of your freshly bathed body and the essence of you. My hand traces your graceful yet sinuous body. As I lay my head on your chest I hear the steadiness of your breathing and the constant beating of your heart as you sleep. With all of my senses now full of you I am lulled to sleep with the rythem of you.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/14/2012 9:23:00 AM

So sensuous and erotic with a touch of innocence Terry. You make touch a sensation reinvented. So special to read this! Luv, Lizabeth

Terry L. Allen
Date: 1/13/2013 2:53:00 PM

Thank you for you kind praise. I hope your holiday season was the best and that you will have a wonderful new year. Huggs TLee

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/11/2012 7:14:00 PM

‡ I Love This Beautiful Photo, Sweet Beautiful Lady * Aside From The Image Presenting These Colours Of Splendours Love * It Also The Viewer To Embrace Its Loveliness & Take Its Beauty Upon A Stroll, Deep Inside * Also, I Loved Your Lovely Comment * 'Sugar & Spice' * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Terry L. Allen
Date: 7/24/2012 3:41:00 PM

Thanks friend glad my words were appreciated and welcome your kind words. Huggs TLee

Justcallme Britt

Date: 6/13/2012 8:39:00 PM

OOOOOOOH yea I like this. So soothing <3

Terry L. Allen
Date: 1/13/2013 3:03:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness to review and am pleased that you enjoyed my simple words. TLee

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/13/2012 1:19:00 PM

Hi Terry, I'm back again... to take another quick read... I also think the little poem you wrote as a comment to me is also splendid! If I had anything to do with the 'inspiration'... well that also makes me happy... ;-)) Terry

Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/13/2012 7:28:00 PM

I just thought that what I wrote made a bigger story to what you wrote. I didn't even write it down to list as a poem. Yes you inspire me with some of your writings. I think more than likely that I could co-write easily with you as you are capeable of fueling my thoughts creatively. Huggs TLee

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/12/2012 2:15:00 PM

Oh my... it's cold and rainy outside... but reading this makes me rather warm... (if you get my drift... ;-)) Very good poem!! It communicates... Terry

Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/12/2012 4:47:00 PM

To me this is how a relationship should be. I told you I had a tendenancy to rattle people. Thanks for your kind words. Huggs TLee