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The Rusty Gate

Dour tears veil the rusty gate until sunset unlocks death’s door. 11/8/2016 One Liner Contest 1st Place

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Tamal Kundu

Date: 11/15/2016 12:40:00 AM

Congratulation on the win, Kim! Loved it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2016 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, Tamal!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/14/2016 8:04:00 AM

This is a great one-line, Kim:) Congratulations on your trophy win:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, Jo!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/12/2016 11:38:00 PM

Congratulations Kim on a beautiful one liner write!:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2016 7:18:00 AM

Thank you, Cheryl!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2016 8:45:00 PM

Congrats on getting a big trophy win, Kim. Yowza!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 9:06:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! Yowza...lol :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/12/2016 8:00:00 PM

Kim congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful line~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Constance!

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 11/12/2016 7:31:00 PM

Good imagery....Congratulations

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Rizwana!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Rizwana!

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 11/12/2016 12:19:00 PM

I love to see good things come to good people. This is one of those times. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 12:40:00 PM

A sweet comment! Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 12:40:00 PM

A sweet comment! Thank you!

Sarita Milliner

Date: 11/12/2016 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place win Kim!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thank you, Sarita!

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/12/2016 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations Kim, well done...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, Charlie!

Larry Bradfield

Date: 11/11/2016 10:04:00 PM

Congratulations..very well doone..Larry

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2016 5:59:00 AM

Thank you, Larry!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/11/2016 6:26:00 PM

Hi Kim, Congratulations on your top win:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 7:52:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/11/2016 5:39:00 PM

Congrats on your top spot Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 7:52:00 PM

Thank you, Jan xo

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/11/2016 4:14:00 PM

Kim, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place trophy win! A very deep one-liner...Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2016 2:31:00 PM

Congrats on your excellent win..Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 3:13:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/11/2016 11:06:00 AM

well done , kim... bright winning wishes for your top spot!..huggs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 3:13:00 PM

Thank you, Nette!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2016 8:06:00 AM

A beautiful and creative take on this theme, Kim; indeed a worthy top-placed winner...congratulations! // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 3:13:00 PM

Thank you, Paul!

Joseph May

Date: 11/11/2016 6:29:00 AM

Congrats on a great win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 6:54:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Jean Murray

Date: 11/11/2016 6:28:00 AM

Sounds like the gateway to a graveyard Kim. Wonderful win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2016 6:54:00 AM

Thank you, Jean!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2016 3:51:00 PM

wow, that is a profound one, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2016 4:46:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!