The Rush

Poetry has a magical style Come and read it, then see for yourself A free ticket to ride the world Gaze within the wild wonder When you feel what you see Your heart gets a rush Paint the canvas Envision Feel it Touch

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Brian Strand

Date: 7/2/2010 12:34:00 AM

You capture the mood of the poetic mind so well Mitch.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Mitch. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/21/2010 12:12:00 AM

Just had to smile when I read this, Mitch! You sure got it right with this etheree, so true about poetry! Congrats on your win! --nikko :)

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 6/20/2010 8:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/20/2010 6:55:00 PM

I love the essence of this poetry poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph

Date: 6/20/2010 12:02:00 PM

What an interesting perspective on writing! So creative. Congratulations on placing third in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your well-deserved honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Amy Green

Date: 6/20/2010 9:35:00 AM

That was puerile in style, written like seeing the world for the first time... great job.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/20/2010 7:22:00 AM

Great description of the magic of poetry. congratulations. on your win. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2010 3:40:00 AM

Mitch, I loved how this was all about poetry! Congratulations on taking third place in my contest. LUv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2010 5:56:00 AM

Love the inverted Etheree...Great idea also..Sara

Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/10/2010 8:38:00 PM

thats always true. poetry, and free write ingeneral, has such a powerful and mystical way to it. lovely write. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/10/2010 1:37:00 AM

Love it! rgds WN

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/9/2010 7:17:00 PM

We painted a mural for VBS last night and it was fun, your poem reminded me of that! thanks!

Mitch White

Date: 6/9/2010 4:06:00 PM

A free ticket to ride the word (world) Ooops

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/9/2010 1:09:00 PM

A great rush to say the least Mitch... u have penned it well my dear friend.. enjoyed a trip into poetry land and getting a great feeling too all for free ... from Mitch Smiles.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2010 10:22:00 AM

Enjoyed it the second time even more. And than they wonder why I am so high off of life. Nice one man in White,..Sidney LeeAnn

Chuck Keys

Date: 6/9/2010 9:17:00 AM

good feeling that gets better in time. thanks, chuck

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2010 9:04:00 AM

Love it!!! Poetry sure has a magic which speaks to us in various ways, enjoyed your wirte..p.d.