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From predawn birth, you dwell alone, Preferring deep shadowland over light. So much easier to conceal what is shown, Nascent ember forelimbs that daunt your sight. With growth in undying murk, and wings in flames In brilliant reds, yellows, golds all blazing. Flying is hopeless with birds of other names. Passions rage from wings, arresting, so amazing. Oh firebird, searing, sizzling, soaring, scorch, Torrid your dazzling, craving fiery force. You blister iron night like a blowtorch, A fuming, fever unleashed from an innate source. Transfixing terror, tormenting trusted truth, Firestorm fervency awakened in sleep zones. Fire wings of lasting, lusting, lingering youth. Each breath covets and dreads your roaring cyclones. Your infernal dance, your ardent limbic rapture Descending, curling, exploding, and unfurling, Brassy, flammable breeze is dream conjure, Ascending, arcing, igniting in fine sterling. Oh firebird, you rise from rudimentary wings, From embryonic burnings, and larval aspirations, From timid beginnings to radiant pinion waving, with Inspiration, you bring her brother, Trepidations. Date: 02/24/2022 Title: The Rudiments of Wings Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/3/2022 1:26:00 AM
"Oh firebird, searing, sizzling, soaring, scorch, Torrid your dazzling, craving fiery force." What wonderful lines ..... and what a powerful poem with the might of of an eagle...! Congratulations on your win !
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Thomas Wells
Date: 3/3/2022 7:58:00 AM
Receiving praise is a special honor, coming from you. Thank you so much, Valsa! We both poured our hearts into our contest entries and that's when the magic begins.
Date: 3/2/2022 3:36:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Thomas:-) Quite a superb write! I'm pleased to discover you, my friend. You're a fine poet!
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Thomas Wells
Date: 3/2/2022 4:12:00 PM
I thank you so much, Edward! I am very honored by the award and it is also a great pleasure to meet you. You are someone I will start closely watching here on PS.

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