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there, among those Ruby Spires stood I, a-gazing toward the mist red winds cut skin, heaven-kissed much too cold for hellish fires … worlds and suns behind us, then a wormhole's spin had swallowed us the joys of youth, so turned to dust for ours, the sake of gloried men in such an odyssey, we crossed three galaxies and matter, dark to find a rare and conscious spark of life, (yet lives are what it cost) tho' I, their peerless proxy, was I deemed no debt to human kind and so that conflict there, did bind that pact of ancient alien cause … my own, a naught-but-violent race had found these beings far from home and sought to then rewrite their tome with our corrupt and vain disgrace yet 'fore we could our ruin, spread that planet's microbe chaperones wreaked mortal plague on us, alone 'til naught but I, was cold and dead so then, those sentient souls and I did journey up from mountain's base until we’d reached a jagged face with crimson columns to the sky! to every side, save one, we saw for endless breadth, a ruby sphere vermilion glows, both far and near - that wondrous planet's crystal maw! the sparkling slopes of gemstone red that slanted downward, out of sight were being swallowed by the night and yet, no trail had shown ahead … hence, far too late to turn around we gave our mortal fate its due one stunning red, exquisite view that only our blessed eyes had found such dazzling visions we beheld that far exceeded all we’d known that held us, transfixed as a stone a yearning that could not be quelled the colors challenged conscious thought with lights and angles, inconceived such iridescence ne’er believed were we not witness on that spot through misty, opalescent glows refracting hues with garnet glare prismatic sparkles here-and-there and dancing flakes of scarlet snow! rainbow shafts of glist’ning light swirling phosphorescent sprays shimmered tints in broad displays that flashed and faded out of sight! palette shades we'd never known - reflected beams from crystal shards the wondrous muse of godly bards were blessings, ours, and ours alone such vistas words can ne'er construe a beauty language shan't appease that brought us, weeping, to our knees and left us shaken, thru-and-thru ... the breathless joy that view inspired was paid for with our souls, you see our covenant made, to wander, free forever … ‘midst those Ruby Spires! ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Applicable Not Applicable Contests" Poetry Contest, Richard Lamoureux, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Write The Poem You Have Always Wanted To Write" Poetry Contest, Caren Krutsinger, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~. in the "Verse A Favoured Theme Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Ancient Aliens" Poetry Contest, Anthony Slausen, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Mountains" Poetry Contest, Julie Leigh Rodeheaver, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Fable" Poetry Contest, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "OK Toss Another One In" Poetry Contest, John Lawless, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 6th Place ~ in the "I Cannot Believe I Wrote That" Poetry Contest, Nina Parmenter, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 9/11/2019 7:09:00 AM
Greg, phenomenal poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/15/2019 10:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Georgia - blessings to you! :o) <3
Date: 9/8/2019 9:41:00 PM
You already know how impressed I was with this fantastic poem Greg and that I faved it! I knew this would be a top winner! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/15/2019 10:19:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Connie, and thanks for coming back to this one ... it is very special to me, for a number of reasons, and one I still read myself from time-to-time. I usually am disgusted with a poem by the time it's finished, lol, but this one I still enjoy. Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 6/3/2019 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations Greg! xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/7/2019 1:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maureen! :o)
Date: 6/3/2019 5:53:00 AM
Wow, I can't believe this masterwork didn't place, Greg! So deserving of a top win. Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 7/7/2019 1:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Edward, I'm so pleased you liked it, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Date: 12/7/2018 8:59:00 AM
I do not possess the vocabulary to adequately comment on this glorious piece! (<--for future reference that is what I mean when I say-->) WOW! another FAVE
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/9/2019 2:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, my good friend, this one is VERY special to me, and I'm so honored that you found it worthy of comment. Blessings, PS! :-) <3
Date: 12/6/2018 9:53:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Greg, your talent really shines in this beauty. I enjoyed the read. John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/9/2019 2:14:00 AM
You are very kind, John, and I'm so pleased you liked this one - thank you! :-)
Date: 12/6/2018 8:51:00 PM
Congratulations Greg on your winning entry. A truly remarkable poem. I would agree, it is one of your VERY best as I have yet to read a bad poem from your pen. I also checked out your bahku website. Loved the sample. If you celebrate Christmas, I hope you and your family have a wonderful and safe holiday. God bless:)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/6/2018 9:21:00 PM
Oh, thank you VERY much, Daniel, that is so kind of you, and I'm so grateful that you enjoyed this very "different" poem, (not everyone's cup o' tea). And thank you for checking out my web site ... two of the (very) old songs there are being rearranged for the album, but will be changed in many respects, with some very special "guest" artists ... I'm excited about it! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 9/11/2018 8:52:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/19/2018 6:56:00 AM
And more thanks to you, Line - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 9/11/2018 6:51:00 AM
Well Greg, thank you for the "let's do it again" ride. Truly enjoyed this. The specter the color the adventure. Thanks for entering the contest
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/19/2018 6:55:00 AM
And thank YOU for the wonderful placement ... as I was telling Nina, this one is very special to me, and any recognition of it puts a smile on my face! Blessings to you, Sir! :-)
Date: 9/11/2018 5:43:00 AM
amazing dear Gregory! Congrats :)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/19/2018 6:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Luloo - I so appreciate it, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/3/2018 4:55:00 PM
All I can say is...this is amazing, Gregory. I loved the journey...I am a believer. A huge congratulations on your well-deserved Podium win! Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/4/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thank you VERY much, Sandra, your opinion carries a lot of weight with me ... I'm so pleased you liked this one, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/3/2018 12:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Gregory. Well done.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/4/2018 9:07:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Line! :-) <3
Date: 3/3/2018 9:30:00 AM
Gregory, WOW....not sure how I missed this one before but.....WOW.....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/4/2018 9:07:00 AM
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, John ... thank you so much, my friend! :-)
Date: 3/3/2018 7:11:00 AM
A multiple winner I see! Congratulations dear poet! Love and hugs, mo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/4/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dearest Mo - glad you enjoyed this one! :-) <3
Date: 8/18/2017 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Greg, very well deserved ~*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2017 3:53:00 AM
Thank you eve, this one I put a LOT into - creatively and literally - and I'm very proud of it, despite the fact that the sci-fi poetry genre is not real popular these days. Much appreciated! <3
Date: 8/17/2017 7:04:00 AM
Splendid write Greg...Congrats on your win
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/17/2017 11:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, so glad you enjoyed it ... it's one of my personal favs, and was my first Enclosed Rhyme - a labor of love! Blessings! :-)
Date: 8/17/2017 4:14:00 AM
This is off the charts! OMG! Your talent shines as bright as the mountains in your glittering imagery! This is a top winner for me and a fave Greg! I read it twice and am doubly impressed! Congratulations on a superb winning entry! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/17/2017 11:28:00 PM
Aww, that is so very sweet of you, Connie - I know sci-fi is not a very popular genre here, but this poem is very special to me, and was a lot of work and imagination. I am very proud of this one, and it was my first EVER Enclosed Rhyme, so it was a lot of fun, too! Thanks again, Dear Friend! <3
Date: 8/16/2017 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/16/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thanks, Lin.
Date: 8/16/2017 7:37:00 AM
Wow spectacular views and writing Greg. Congratulations :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/16/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi! :-)
Date: 8/16/2017 7:36:00 AM
A colorful tale! Congrats, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/16/2017 7:53:00 AM
Very kind of you - thanks, Kim!
Date: 5/30/2017 8:16:00 AM
This is perfect for the "Red" contest indeed. Yes, I am a SciFi lover. I have quite a collection os new and older SciFi books. My all-time favourite is Bester's "The Demoloshed Man". But I love so many more that I don't even know where to start. (Asimov, Bradbury and so on and so forth). For my own poems I like to find inspiration in Greek mythology, especially in my darker poems, those explore Styx and its brethren and sisters :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/24/2017 4:06:00 PM
I just saw all these, Buddy - thank you SO much! This was such a labor of love for me ... one of those that "flowed", but still took a lot of deep thought and imagination. I am VERY proud of this one, though sci-fi is not very popular, here or elsewhere. Maybe we can change that? ;-)
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Darren White
Date: 5/30/2017 8:22:00 AM
Plus Jannie is right. You need more views, but that entails more action from your side. And I think you lead a very busy life, or else we'd mail more often than we do now. But still!
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Darren White
Date: 5/30/2017 8:20:00 AM
Enclosed rhyme is one of my favourites, I love this poem Greg, the story it tells. How what you experience can be worth more than anything material
Date: 3/11/2017 11:57:00 PM
Hi Greg, Congratulations on your fine win: -) Alexis
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/14/2017 11:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis - very much appreciated! :-)
Date: 2/14/2017 9:49:00 AM
Awesome poem!! I loved every verse and can readily see that this is a true gem!! A7 and new fav for my favorite poems list. Thanks...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/14/2017 11:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Robert, that means a great deal! I very much appreciate your kind words!
Date: 2/6/2017 1:07:00 PM
Wow Greg Im salivating. This theme and topic is what fires me up as well. Im afraid as poets we must endeavour to find the impossible and describe the heavens. What a responsibilty we are charged with! I love what you did here and some real vocabulary talent.I wrote you about how to interact on PS in order to be more noticed. Your talent is too superior to be ignored so do your bit to get more views. I would love to see you up there
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 2/26/2017 8:21:00 AM
Greg I only saw your reply now and wouldve missed it had I not gone back over this poem. Rather email because i tend to forget stuff. Or at least inbox me. breedtjannie@gmail.com
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/6/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend, and thanks for the tips ... sadly at present, my job leaves me with precious little time for reading and surfing here, but I hope to start working it in in the not-too-distant future. I work for one of the most powerful men in the world, (and his family), and they keep schedules that are not very conducive to doing much else but work and (intense) play, lol. I'm working five deals in the US at present, and have more waiting in Shanghai and Switzerland. I do my best to interact a bit with those who comment, but I'm going to start giving some time to perusing some of those from the front page and some of those you find worthy, as you and I seem to have similar vibes. Thanks again for everything - I had SO much fun with this one! I've been writing a sci-fi book for years now and I encapsulated a chapter of it to create this poem, and my imagination had a feast - I think I'll do more sci-fi poems! :-)

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