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The Rose In the Desert

THE ROSE IN THE DESERT Days dragging with patches of memories of unhappy infancy You fell on me as rain in hot summer A traveler in desert sans company has no dreams of paradise But collage of thoughts of imminent tragedy Horrible flashes of father kicking mother Tears she shed measured ocean of torture Found no the other side of the ocean She swam with lean tender hands with children intimidated Home without love is hell; Father is the devil; torturer of wife and children Little hearts grow brooding over vengeance Agony and persecution nourish malevolence defeating benevolence Castaway perplexed in the desert of despondency I saw you; the rose in desert; fountain of relief and love Words flowed as drops of grape wine My soul flew to a new horizon where doves hover with gentle wings In the deepest chamber of my heart I preserved Watered with my tears not to fade Brighter than the brightest in the whole world The solace and zest in the lonely battlefield My ecstasy and partner in celebration My love and breath; pulse of my life The autumn of the crusader The peace in my sleep and sweetness in my dream You adorn the desert; wonder in the barren A diamond glittering in the darkness An expectation to the forsaken Lighthouse to the ship in the storm ASOKUMAR.K.A 12/12/12

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Date: 8/17/2013 11:10:00 PM
CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/18/2013 1:57:00 AM
Thank you for the message SKAT ... with love ASOKUMAR
Date: 8/17/2013 10:20:00 PM
Hello Asokumar, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *
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Date: 8/18/2013 1:59:00 AM
Thank you for the message Linda, with love ASOKUMAR
Date: 8/13/2013 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! Laura :) Strong imagery
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/14/2013 12:39:00 PM
Hai Laura, thank you for reading my poem and making valuable commenting, I've read some of your poems you are a true poet dear, keep in touch
Date: 8/11/2013 7:07:00 AM
Man, what an entrance! Great way to debut on the Soup, nice poem and welcome!!! MC
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/11/2013 11:31:00 AM
Thank you MC, keep in touch, I'll go on posting my own and reading poetry of Soup realm. hear you!?
Date: 8/5/2013 10:29:00 AM
Hello new member: Asokumar ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/8/2013 2:20:00 AM
Anne Lise Anderson , I have come across some of your poems , good, keep on posting
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/8/2013 2:15:00 AM
thank you Anne Lise Anderson for your comment keep in touch, I will share more
Date: 8/4/2013 5:42:00 PM
A deep thought,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/8/2013 2:18:00 AM
Skat Oz thank you for your observation and comment I have read some of your poems and found rarely worded , be in the flow, ASOKUMAR
Date: 8/4/2013 3:40:00 PM
A P., wow, the imagery sparks with light... love it-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@... ...
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Asokumar Panangad
Date: 8/8/2013 2:27:00 AM
Poet Destroyer, rare name you have chosen, but 'Hands' is a different creation, thank you for the comment you made on my poem, keep in touch

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