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The Rose Hangs On

Thirty degrees and heavy frost Of last night, killed the Impatiens The running rose blooms and buds frozen The Ginko is almost naked nearly all leaves gone Only a few yellow strands Left on the chilled branches The white hoar's frost excentuates Gold beneath the mostly barren limbs Air is frozen as breathe into lungs Comes out as foggy drift Too cold to linger for the warmth Of the inside seems so appealing Responsiblity calls for today Is celebration Sunday at church There will be dinner after service Then an extra choir practice It was a hectic day but refreshing In its own way, renewed friendships Sharing a meal with church family Seeing people enjoy what I prepared Went out to see the damage to plants From the first hard frost of the season Most tender shoot are totally gone It is amazing though the rose hangs on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/9/2009 2:38:00 PM
Nice piece Sara, golly you like these Ginko's >> James
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:28:00 AM
Lovely poem, and I love the last line. Your love of nature shines through your poetry, and I enjoy reading every one of your poems ~Juliane
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Date: 12/7/2009 6:54:00 AM
Perhaps the rose is the human spirit. Thanks for your read of my poetry ... I hang too for that. Good write.
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:58:00 AM
Very lovely and nice Poem. Good description of frost and its impacts on tiny plants. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 12/6/2009 11:36:00 PM
Its lovely when I a flower clings on despite the climate.Rgds Brian Thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 12/6/2009 7:56:00 PM
That it amazing indeed. Very nicely written. An open window to your day, your thoughts and what is meaningful to you. Great write! Thanks for sharing, Caroline.
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Date: 12/6/2009 6:55:00 PM
another amazing write Sara. I love writtings on nature!
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Date: 12/6/2009 6:20:00 PM
First signs of winter I see Sara. Also here where I live, but winter has come in like a lamb. I hope we will not have many months of cold weather. Nice poem, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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