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The Rose Bowl

The sky is a gigantic bowl of pink turned upside down, spilling soft rose petals that peeked out from beneath snow white billowed clouds till - fully blossomed - they burst forth. Growing radiant at the edge of twilight, they’ve scattered as rubescent streaks falling, lush and luminescent, as we watch in solitude. No parade this evening - just you and I aglow, wishing for an eternity to be like this: so splendidly in love. . . in the pink. Title and first line changed back to original Submitted Oct. 5, 2021 (#8 word - Rosy) for '''R'' Contest, New or Old' Contest Info Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 10/10/2021 8:30:00 AM
Beautifully penned Andrea, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/7/2021 3:15:00 PM
Dropping back again with many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2021 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well-deserved win Andrea. You penned a fantastic poem. Warm hugs
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Date: 10/7/2021 8:13:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my "R" contest with this wonderful poem, so well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 4/15/2018 5:00:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea.
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Date: 2/17/2017 5:48:00 PM
Oh, I remember this one - such a wonderful image! Congrats on your placement in this contest
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:34:00 AM
I love the picture you painted congrats well done xx
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:38:00 AM
Andrea-beautiful imagery "scattered rubescent streaks"...beautiful lady :) congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/25/2016 8:04:00 AM
Imagery at its best:) congratulations Andrea:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 3:47:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Andrea. I like the image of the upside down bowl of pink :) Agnes
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your placement. I really never thought of the sun as an upside down bowl of pink but now that you mention it, Yeah, I can see that:)
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Date: 9/24/2016 5:28:00 PM
Uniquely written and vintage, congratulations.
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Date: 9/24/2016 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 3/24/2016 10:59:00 PM
Ah, such magnificent imagery combined with word usage that honors the English language. Then, of course, there is the unique conceptualization. A stunning achievement, Andrea. Congratulations! (Dang, you're good.)
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Date: 3/20/2015 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Another beautiful poem from the best.
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:32:00 PM
Awesome write Andrea! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/19/2015 9:48:00 PM
That must have been an awesome sight! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/19/2015 4:00:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:29:00 PM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/1/2014 3:14:00 PM
''No parade this evening - just you and I aglow...'', this is sweet Andrea.Congrats and happy weekend.
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Date: 10/30/2014 10:32:00 PM
Amazing n mesmerising Andrea! love ur write much, perfectly done, goes to my fav. congrats on huge win!
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Date: 10/30/2014 7:40:00 PM
congratulations my poetic friend, while reading a thought came to my mind..wow I'd like to have what she had
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Date: 10/30/2014 11:26:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea, on the win with this romantic write with lovely images
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Date: 10/30/2014 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win and outstanding poem my dearest friend Andrea! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora- reply to soupmail pls. ty
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Date: 10/29/2014 9:48:00 PM
Beautiful and so sweetly romantic. Congratulations on your win Andrea.
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