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The Rose

like a bee to nectar you rush through the garden, heading directly to the biggest red rose in your path the tulip, vibrant and strong in your haste for the beautiful rose, you brush against the tulip, obliviously knocking the fragrant petals to the ground you grab for the perfect rose cursing to yourself as the barbs from the stem cut into your ungloved hand as you wipe the blood, from the vicious tear in your skin on your pants, you look down at the dirt and on the tulip now crushed under your boots

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/4/2010 8:49:00 PM
i appreciate this metaphor about love. i can truly relate. i am the tulip. i think that you captured the feelings of many. i really like your poem!
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:24:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 7:22:00 PM
thanks for the comments, Sue...no, never been to Maine.. :) JB
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:15:00 PM
Ah, what a sad ending here J.B. ... smile ... but excellent writing and a great selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. I know a J.B. who lives in Maine ... is that you? Anyway, congratulations on having your writing selected!!
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:11:00 PM
Very expressive, descriptive, and emotive write that is penned here in this week's featured piece. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:19:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week J B >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:22:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week J.B. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2009 8:17:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest JB.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/29/2009 7:25:00 AM
The lovely Rose ventures again, this time by JB's penm a delight to read>>James
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:59:00 PM
lovely - very good imagery - heading for a rose that can hurt and neglecting the gentle tulip which is overlooked.
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Date: 6/6/2009 6:22:00 AM
wow! wonderful imagery in this piece. great flow of words, and a wonderful message
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Date: 6/6/2009 3:34:00 AM
Pretty:)
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Date: 6/6/2009 12:13:00 AM
Very clever, the quest for beauty and perfection! Lovely poem.
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Date: 6/5/2009 11:51:00 PM
Amazing write! - jeremia
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