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The Rose

She is a symphony of beauty a composition of pure elegance and grandeur a masterpiece creation sculpted by the God's above Her scent is heaven's gift to us and so are her thorns she is an orchestra ecclesiastical, worshiping at the font of life a flower of great valor, there is great beauty from within please do not let her wither, help her bloom play her song and raise her to the sun, help her break the glass and remain in your heart, forever young.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2023 12:32:00 PM

"The Rose" is a lovely write/picture. I love the pink rose the best. Have a fun day writing away..................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/23/2023 4:12:00 AM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7yVpzzqA3q0

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/23/2023 1:28:00 AM

- A beautiful symphony it is, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/23/2023 1:01:00 AM

What a wonderful tribute to the rose. So poetic, almost emotional. Hugs.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/22/2023 8:34:00 PM

Yes, both the scent and the thorns are gifts, and love the lines 'play her song/break the glass' - so inspiring!

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/22/2023 6:55:00 PM

The thing that adds to the value of a rose is the fact that they need replacing. I gages how much a boy loves a girl. Of which you are fully aware of the value.