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The Root

Malice unsated. Insatiable. The children of the frenzy belch poison beyond the shell, yet suckle there at the breast of an uncertain woman gratefully turned to stone; long for a distant father who has quietly despised them since the uncertain womb. Insatiable malice. Unsated. 18th June 2020

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/11/2022 9:00:00 AM

A remarkably astute write. Malice is multifaceted in its origin. There is indeed an insidious root from parent to child when hate is taught + 'belches' like 'poison.' Very fine posting. Best wishes, Brian

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2020 10:23:00 AM

The way I read this the children are the fruit of insatiable abuse, Lawrence....an uncooperative woman who endured but did not participate. ~ Regards // paul

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 6/28/2020 10:57:00 AM

You are close to the mark, Paul. Human malice is handed on from one generation to the next, fathers and mothers alike failing to nurture the better angels of their offspring. Thank you for visit and very mindful comment.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/24/2020 10:24:00 PM

The root of malice is the invisible hand that stabs and claws weaken souls. Mankind in its race into the darkness. Seeks lusting gems hell's wicked demons extol. Of mortal flesh and brevity of life. Of greed and dark desires thought divine. Embracing evil and world's eternal strife. Drinking wine born from black-poisoned vines. Your wonderful dark piece inspires me to write my friend. A fav..

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 6/25/2020 1:38:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Your analysis is razor sharp.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/19/2020 6:00:00 PM

Intriguing words of profound insight. Enjoyed your words. God bless you with many more and much love sent your way, Gina

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 6/20/2020 7:23:00 AM

Thank you very much, Regina, visit and comment appreciated.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/18/2020 10:56:00 PM

"belch poison beyond the shell" There is so much truth in this. You always know how to say so much, in just a few words. This is deep and powerful. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 6/19/2020 2:12:00 AM

Thanks, Branderz, it always pleases me if it resonates with the reader in any way.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/18/2020 7:39:00 AM

Powerful write, Lawrence--you convey the feelings that tug the heart. I like how you reversed phrases in the first and last lines.

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 6/19/2020 2:09:00 AM

Thank, Vijay, always good to have your support, my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/18/2020 7:31:00 AM

Oh my. Horribly good poem. Roots exposed. xomo

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 6/19/2020 2:02:00 AM

Thanks,Mo, too kind.