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The Room

The room was in darkness Save for the solitary shard of light Shining directly onto that point on the wall The blood had dried in long back If the room could speak There would be screams The chains still hung on the wall Frozen in time A timely reminder To the events of that day She touched them Just to understand Why She expected the feel of cold metal Instead, a strange heat surged through her body Compelling her into the chains Tightly binding her against the wall Trapped, she waited He was watching her Listening as her heart pounded in fear Just the beginning She thought she was screaming As the blood entered her mouth, slowly Forcing her eyes to scream Her mind now drowning in panic As life began to fade He watched her, fascinated, as she entered the next phase The journey into the afterlife Just like the others The room was in darkness Save for the solitary shard of light Shining directly onto that point on the wall.

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Date: 11/29/2023 2:25:00 AM
Good Morning Paul. Hi. I very much liked the illusion and imagery for you stir the reader's mind. I also liked how you ended and came full circle from your beginning lines to close your entry which is a nice poetic touch. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. May this day find you well. Blessings and Peace (smile) - PS - This entry is one that should be read out loud with emphasis and feeling.
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Paul Bell
Date: 12/2/2023 2:32:00 AM
Dark days indeed
Date: 10/7/2023 3:30:00 PM
a dark tale reminiscent of Poe's style. I was drawn into the mystery and the intrigue. A wonderful write. The beginning and ending lines grabbed me.
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/8/2023 8:45:00 AM
Beats me why people walk into strange rooms.
Date: 10/6/2023 10:12:00 PM
WOW! Intense and mysterious poetry, Paul. Very intriguing ... you let us figure out the bigger picture. Delicious food for thought, my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/8/2023 8:50:00 AM
Getting to that time of year again.
Date: 10/6/2023 12:10:00 PM
Quite the storyteller. A dark and frightening tale.
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Paul Bell
Date: 10/8/2023 8:51:00 AM
Practicing for my trick or treating.

Book: Shattered Sighs