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The Roman Legion

Synonymous of The Roman legion, Is strength and patriotism, Courage put to swords! Determined bloodshed, belligerent war, Humanity stands the gaff, Victory or failure ? Kimos- 10/7/6 Written on 30/6/14 Contest- The Roman Legion Sponsor- Isaiah Zerbst Ranked 4th

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Date: 7/14/2014 10:53:00 PM
Upma,, I'm passing by to say hi, and thank you for the reply, you left on the comment I left below... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 7/7/2014 2:22:00 PM
So many victories, and one massive failure. Your poem captures them well, and so deserved of it's win, nice one Upma, James :)
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Date: 7/4/2014 7:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win my friend.
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:33:00 AM
I like how you questioned its value. I think the romans were often too brutal and they certainly had a great decline. I like this .
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:16:00 AM
I admire how intelligently you address the ethics and meaning of the Legion's motivations Upma. I think of the great aphorism, " might makes right ". J.A.B.
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Date: 7/1/2014 7:16:00 AM
Hmmm...this is a different take; you give your own 'dressing' to the theme. Short but expressive. Congrats on a worthy win. // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/1/2014 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Paul ! Ur comments r always sought for! Glad to hv exclusive ones !
Date: 7/1/2014 6:30:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, Dr. Sharma! Hugs.. Arlene
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/1/2014 9:02:00 AM
Thanks dear Arlene !
Date: 6/30/2014 10:29:00 PM
Dr Upma, nice win..PD
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/1/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thnx PD !

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