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The Rock Clubs Are Gone

The rock club is dark, the people are strange I love it here, I don't want it to change A can of Red Stripe hits the mark The people are strange, the rock club is dark Black No 1, a favourite song Twirl and glide and sing along Dressed to kill and moves to stun A favourite song, Black No 1 The people I view, the vibe I feel All wearing masks though their faces are real Mysterious beauty that I can see through The vibe I feel, the people I view The clubs are all gone, I have nowhere to go I don't really want to go with the flow But I existed there, how do I move on? I have nowhere to go, the clubs are all gone *Picture change to me with a can of Red Stripe which I drink only in rock clubs or gigs and wouldn't touch otherwise haha

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Date: 4/26/2023 5:30:00 PM
Another fine poem, DD. Impressive!
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Date: 4/26/2023 9:37:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/26/2023 3:09:00 PM
I love this one too ! You have gone crazy with swap quatrains. This one is my favourite I think, I used to love going to night clubs when I was young. Wonderfully written D.
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Date: 4/26/2023 3:13:00 PM
I love the form, it takes 5 minutes to write something that looks like a proper poem :)

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